Chapter 4
As she made her way back into Ponyville and the Golden Oaks Library, Twilight Sparkle hurt.
She hurt a lot.
However, her inability to quantify the level of the pain she was in aside from ‘a lot’ was due to the fact that not all of the pain she was experiencing seemed to be coming from her head. It was a kind of pain she had never really felt before and didn’t seem to have any physical cause. The unicorn felt as if this strange new kind of wound was sapping her strength and putting some invisible weight on her body that made it hard to breathe.
On top of which, her eyes were watering. That at least was understandable. After all, she was in a great deal of physical pain, and shedding tears was a natural response to such stimuli.
The runny nose was a bit of an oddity since they were in Autumn and thus no Spring allergies were occurring but…Twilight was more preoccupied with just moving forward to have more than two worries on her slightly diminished mental capacity.
So the unicorn trudged through Ponyville and thankfully only had to tell Snips and Snails to beat it, not the majority of her other future students. However, before she could make it to the sanctuary that was her library and lay down on the bed to finally release her lachrymal fluids where no one could see, the door opened to reveal a mulberry pony with a pet carrier saddlebag barring Twilight’s way.
The local schoolteacher Ms Cheerilee was a pony after Twilight’s own heart…most of the time. While the unicorn loved knowledge for knowledge’s sake, Cheerilee was a more down to earth scholar that focused on the need to know stuff. Still, Twilight respected the woman for her profession. After all, it was one that Princess Celestia Herself held in the highest regard and even engaged in with very lucky ponies. A position that Twilight would soon hold herself in fact. She couldn’t wait to tell Princess Celestia about the first lesson she would be teaching all the young ponies of Ponyville.
“Oh Ms Sparkle, hello there,” Cheerilee. “I’m glad I caught you. I…are you okay?”
After setting down her basket, Twilight took in a deep breath through her nose and nodded. She didn’t want to air her dirty laundry in public…especially with her headache and the phantom pain in her chest that might have been the onset of a pulmonary disease. “No I’m fine, it’s just a little…hiccup,” she assured the teacher while trying to give herself a boost of confidence and hide the inner turmoil that her body was under. However, the tone of her voice came out flat and empty of any emotion. “I’m sure I’ll feel better by morning. Is there something I can help you with?”
“I just stopped by to remind you about thing we arranged for you to teach after school on Monday,” Cheerilee replied.
Doing her best to be careful with her head, Twilight slowly nodded. “Right, the after school special class on the magic of…friendship,” the unicorn mumbled after a pause while the pain in her chest doubled in intensity. “I’ll…be there.”
The earth pony teacher gave Twilight a measuring look, then shrugged. “Alright then,” she said before turning so Twilight could see the pet carrier she had brought with her. “And do you know where Fluttershy is today? I’m afraid the class pet is acting a little oddly and…well, you know they don’t put any funds in the school’s budget for animal care so I was hoping she could tell me if he’s really sick before I take him to the vet. But…I’ve heard from a dozen ponies that say she’s either in the Everfree to slay a hydra or combating something called the Smooze in another dimension so…”
“She’s in her cottage, in her basement where she keeps all her sewing and knitting supplies,” Twilight told her while trying to keep her voice neutral. “Just tell her pets you’ve got an animal for her to look at and don’t let the bunny scare you off.” You know now that I think about it…quickly discarded signs of a mob…stampede of ponies…what the buck did Angel do to run everypony off like that?
As she got into the library, Twilight found Spike performing his usual cleanup duties and told him there was a tea mix in the basket she left by the door that needed some hot water before going into her bedroom.
Safe and alone, Twilight walked up to her bed and just climbed on top of the covers. She let out a long breath and…started to regret crawling back in bed when her mind became unburdened by activity.
“I patted you on the back…”
“You caused them, didn‘t you?”
“I tried to help ponies.”
“You were out of control!”
“SMARTY PANTS!”
“Self-centered, illiterate, pigheaded…”
“You were never my friend!”
“And Good Riddance RAINBOW TRASH!”
Twilight cried into her pillow as the memories continued to run through her mind, over and over again.
Fluttershy looked up from her knitting as she heard a knock on the door. It wasn’t her front door, the sound of the impact was far too loud and close. It was the door at the top of the stairs leading out of her basement.
Worry flooded into her mind for a moment as she realized somepony from last night’s mob that Harry had come back and had managed they were in her house!
Needles were dropped as Fluttershy remembered that terrible night. All those ponies carrying her around, touching her, crowding her…some of them had even been so mean they had yanked off a few of her feathers and screamed in joy like they had just gotten a trophy or something! The memories of just being surrounded by so many other strange ponies, being touched and violated like she had been…it was a million times worse than when she had been at flight camp, or a model!
At least back then nopony had…assaulted her!
And there was what happened before that, which was even worse!
She had been so proud of finally being able to do something worthwhile for Rainbow Dash, to help her overcome that flaw of Rainbow’s that Twilight pointed out; much like Fluttershy’s own problems with dragons, crowded places, out of control situations, talking, an over abundance of clouds, a lack of sufficient cloud cover, and all those other things that made her nervous. Fluttershy didn’t really understand what the big deal was with how Rainbow talked about herself all the time, but if Twilight said it was bad for her…well, who was a nopony like Fluttershy to argue with the personal student of Princess Celestia?
But then…
“If that’s what you call help, then I don’t ever want your help again!”
“I just don’t understand,” Fluttershy mumbled to herself.
More knocking made Fluttershy flinch, and she looked up at the door for a few seconds before sighing in defeat. If she was lucky, it wouldn’t be as big a crowd that chased her home last night and if it was…she didn’t want to be trapped in a basement.
After ascending the stairs, Fluttershy opened the door and blinked at the friendly face. “Oh…hello Cheerilee,” she said before looking past the pony to see if there were any others. Thankfully, she was alone. “Is there something you…need?”
Fluttershy blinked as she caught sight of the pet carrier. “Oh my, is there something wrong with your pet, or do you just need me to groom him?”
“I’m not really sure,” Cheerilee admitted. “And it’s the class pet. I was wondering if you could…take a look at him?”
The pegasus opened the mobile cage to look inside, then turned her attention back to the earth pony. “Well, I’m not really a vet but I do know a lot about animals, so…I guess I could give it a shot.”
A second later, the carrier was on the ground, and Cheerilee was nodding to her in thanks. “Great! Just drop him off at the school at the closing bell and tell me if anything’s wrong or if he’s just having one of those moods so I know whether to take him to the vet or not.”
“W-What?” Fluttershy asked in a whisper as her mind informed her of all that entailed. She would have to go outside.
Into town.
Surrounded by all those ponies again!
No, I can’t do that, I can’t do that again!
When she looked up to tell the earth pony she would need to come and get her pet at the cottage, Fluttershy saw that Cheerilee was already closing the door behind her.
“Course Ah knew right then that if Ah didn’t act, all of Equestria was doomed,” Applejack said to the fillies and colts that had gathered around her stand. “So Ah leapt forward an grabbed onto Twilight’s hoof, and saved her from fallin to her death. Then we went an stopped Nightmare Moon.”
As the fillies Ahhed and the colts Oooooooed, Applejack pushed her last basket of apples forward for them to reach and collected the bits from all the little foals before she looked around. “Now, which of ya’ll wanna hear bout how I saved them tourists?”
One of the fillies in the back raised her foreleg. “I have a question,” she said with an odd lisp.
“Ain’t you that filly that played with my sister till you went and got yer cutie mark then ditched her like a rotten tomater?” Applejack asked.
“Yep, that’s her alright,” Applebloom agreed in a bored tone as she sat beside her sister’s stand like she had been for the past hour.
“Yes,” Twist replied with her odd lisp. “But Applejack…how did you know that the cart was going over the hill? Or with the balloon, and especially the dam? That’s miles out of town. Did you know all that stuff was gong to happen ahead of time and just jumped in at the last second to save the day rather than prevent the disaster in the first place?”
Applejack nodded at the intelligence of the filly’s questions while resisting the urge to frown at the hidden accusation. “Whelp…ya see, we started this Mare Do Well thing as a way to teach Rainbow Dash a lesson cause she was getting so outta hand. Ah couldn’t stand the way she went on and on about herself no more. So, me and Twilight or Twilight an Pinkie would wait up in the Ponyville clock tower where we could see her, and whenever she swooped down, Twilight would teleport one of us down to show her what fer. Then all of ya’ll were lookin to a real hero like me stead of that pegasus.”
“Feh! Twilight’s a better hero than you, she saved the whole town from that flood when Rainbow Dash broke the dam!” one of them two unicorn colts that used to follow Trixie around cried out. “You wouldn’t have been able to do anything!”
Taking a moment to remind herself she was talking to a youngin, Applejack took a deep breath…
…and had to hold it when Cloud Kicker’s little sister started talking. “Feh! Some of the water still made it into town. If it had been Fluttershy, she would have pulled down a huge cloud from the sky and let it soak up all the water before it could even get that far!”
“Clouds can’t do that!”
“Yes they can! In fact, Fluttershy would have packed them soooooooo tight, she could have made a whole new dam out of clouds!”
“Nuh-uh!”
“Yeah-huh!”
“Nuh-uh!”
“Yeah-huh!”
“Nuh-uh!”
“Yeah-huh!”
Applebloom stood up and glared at the two fighting foals. “Oh yeah, well Applejack would have kicked the canyon walls and caused a rockslide and stopped the water that way!”
Before her sister could get fully involved in the argument, Applejack kicked her stand to quickly collapse it most of the way back into a cart, then looked over to Bloom. “Gimme a hoof with the wheels and the hitchen, then we can get goin back to the farm.”
With their hero’s stock dry for the third time that day, the foals had learned when it was time to pick up and leave, and they took their conversations elsewhere.
“Nuh-uh!”
“Yeah-huh!”
“Nuh-uh!”
“Yeah-huh!”
“Nuh-uh!”
“Yeah-huh!”
As the sisters made their way home, Applebloom looked up to Applejack. “So…you and yer friends were doin all that stuff just to teach Rainbow Dash a lesson?”
“Yep,” Applejack said before Rainbow’s reaction to their reveal ran through her mind, and the farm pony frowned at the memory. “Don’t you be like her Applebloom. She’s just a conceited blowhard that don’t care about nothin but herself, always goin on about how great she was…well me and the other girls showed her different. And remember, a good pony let’s her actions speak fer themselves, they don’t need to go yammerin on about how great they think are when nopony wants to hear it. Specially when it ain’t true!”
“Um-”
And a good pony sticks close to her family,” Applejack said as she continued to impart her wisdom to her little sister. “Why, that lousy braggart came to Ponyville when she was eighteen years old, on her birthday! Just up and left her folks when she was finally old enough to start contibutin and payin em back fer all the hard work they put into raisin her!”
“Okay but-”
And fer what? Feedin her own ego, that’s what! Only thing that mare ever cared about was getting cheered about by other ponies, and look where that got er,” Applejack finished.
“So…a good pony let her actions speak for themselves?” Applebloom asked.
Applejack blinked, and then looked back at her sister’s thoughtful face and smiled. It was good she seemed to be really putting to memory her big sister’s words.
Then, she looked back up at the older pony. “Hey Applejack, can you come and pick me up from school tomorrow?”
The absurdity of the question threw Applejack’s train of thought completely off the tracks and into the water below. “What? Now why would you be needin me to walk ya home?” Ponyville was about as safe as Equestria could get…long as ya stayed away from the Everfree.
“Um…you have been seeing what’s been going on around town since the start of this Mare Do Well thing, right?” Applebloom deadpanned.
“…good point,” Applejack agreed as she remembered all the occurrences for the past week. All things considered, it was probably best to be prepared.
Despite the oddity of her eyes, Derpy was able to see her partner in the moonlight just fine as the other pegasus continued to pack the clouds together…or pound them…
“Stupid…bucking…Twilight…Sparkle!” Rainbow Dash exclaimed as the cloud beneath her became the correct shape and she flapped her wings to get off it, then looked around for something else to…well, she probably wanted to punch something.
As the pegasus’s head swerved from side to side, Derpy noticed an odd glimmer in her eye. “Are you okay Rainbow Dash?”
“I’m fine!” she snapped.
The reply made Derpy cock her head in confusion. “You don’t sound fine, and…are you crying?”
Rainbow Dash looked away from the other pegasus for a second and brought a foreleg up to wipe her brow or something, then turned around to face Derpy. “No!”
“It looked like you were crying,” she told her partner.
For a moment, Derpy saw Rainbow Dash’s face contort into an angry frown, and then she looked down at the cumulonimbus beneath them. “It’s these stupid clouds! They’re defective,” she explained. “They rain up when you pack them in.”
Derpy looked down at the clouds beneath her in confusion. “Really? I haven’t seen them do that,” she said. Although, Derpy had to admit that her eyesight wasn’t the best. Rainbow Dash’s bright colors stood out in the night with the help of Luna’s moon. Water droplets…not so much.
The pair of pegasi were silent as they moved towards the next patch of clouds that needed packing. “Hey Derpy, have you ever…done something that made you feel bad? Even if you needed to do it?”
“Well…I do need to punish Dinky every now and then,” Derpy replied. “I didn’t do it enough with Sparkler and… oh pony is she a loudmouth these days. Sometimes, I think I go too far with Dinky because of that though.”
Rainbow Dash let out a groan that sounded pretty frustrated. “Yeah well…she deserved it!”
They landed on the area of the storm cloud that was sticking up a little more than the rest, and Derpy spoke while Rainbow Dash began to hammer it down. “I dunno, Dinky may have been playing with her doll in the house, but I don’t think she meant to break the vase. Maybe I should give her the toy back.”
“Wait, what?” Rainbow asked. “What the hay does Dinky have to do with all that crap Twilight and the rest of them did?”
Derpy sat down on the cloud, and winced when she heard the lightning go off from the impact. Thankfully, they had been in an empty field with nopony around instead of inside the city limits like the last three times she had caused an accidental strike…earlier tonight. “Um…what does Twilight have to do with anything?”
“MARE DO WELL!” Rainbow exclaimed as she threw up in a fit before leaning over to face Derpy. “They were behind it, all of it! Then they show up with their stupid smug faces thinking they’re all anything but a bunch of backstabbing jerks! then they’re all ‘you’re bragging and bragging is wrong, and having fans is wrong, and being cool is wrong, and we’re so much better than you because weeeeeeeeee lie through our teeth, and cheat, and wear a costume and sign autographs without trying to share the spotlight with Applejack like you did Rainbow Trash’!”
As the other mare paused for breath, Derpy raised a hoof to bring up a point. “Okay but, I thought you guys were best friends, can’t you just forgive them?”
Rainbow Dash froze in the air for a second and dropped to the ground before wiping more of the accidental upside down water discharge that got released when she packed the cloud. “I could forgive the back stabbing, and the name calling, and the cheating, and how Twilight nearly destroyed the town with her stupid stunt at the dam, and even their stupid smug smiles as they just spit out load after load of hypocrisy,” the pegasus grumbled. “But after what they did, what they really did…no, I can’t forgive them for that. Ever.”
“What’d they do?” Derpy asked.
For a few seconds, Rainbow Dash just looked at Derpy like the gray mare was either crazy, or insanely stupid, then let out a long sigh before they started talking. “I’m going to join the Wonderbolts one day. Do you know what they do? They do stunts and save ponies when nopony else is around to do it, and they sign autographs, and go on tours where they hold press conferences to talk about how awesome they are and let all these other ponies make money by selling posters, and T-shirts, and costumes.
“It’s my dream, my entire life…and they-they pissed on it!”
Derpy backed away from the enraged pegasus that was shouting at the sky and let out a nervous laugh, then gulped when Rainbow Dash turned her attention towards the gray mare.
A few seconds later, after the moment of anger had passed, Derpy thought a change of topic in order. She decided to bring up something she had wanted to since Rainbow stopped by her house at the start of their shift. “Hey Rainbow, you like Dinky, right?”
The residual traces of fury on the pegasus’s face melted away and became confusion. “Your filly? Yeah. Why?”
“Oh I can’t pick her up when I’m supposed to tomorrow because of my job,” Derpy explained. Apparently she was staying after school for some kind of special class, and it let out at the same time as her mail route. “Can you go get her for me? She really took a liking to you yesterday.”
Rainbow shrugged. “Sure.”
oh boy next chapter is not going to be pretty
also there better be a mud fight
There's gonna be a fallout at the school! Ooh, this is gonna get good and bad at the same time!
aw twist aw rainbow! .....applejack. something bad gonna go down next chapter.
Applejack....... you fucking hypocritical bitch. This is why no one likes applejack as their favorite. Element of Honesty? Deceitful through omission whenever it's convenient. Wants to teach Rainbow Dash a lesson in humility? Can't shut her trap about herself. I personally, HATE, Applejack
Well, like the Scripture goes, "Out of the mouths of babes". Looks like at least some of the kids in Ponyville (Apple Bloom; etc.) are proving to be smarter than the supposed grown-ups, huh?
And it looks like at least three of the girls (Rainbow, Applejack and Fluttershy) are gonna come face-to-face at the schoolhouse at the same time the next day. That should be an...interesting...confrontation, to say the least!
(Anyone get the idea that Derpy is a lot wiser (and smarter) than she lets in in the actual show? I think I have a lot more respect for her here because of what she did at the end of this chapter.)
That said, I can't wait to see what happens in Chapter 5!
Don't keep us in suspense for long, please!
4814135 You know, I agree with you on some points about AJ's attitude in this fic, but by no means others. Is she acting stupid? Heck, yeah, she is. To put it mildly, to borrow (and paraphrase) an expression that I heard that AL Capone used about one of his rivals, she'd let her head get away from her hat". But bear in mind that this is just a story. The author, I think, is trying to make a point to all of the girls, not just Rainbow.
And, for what it's worth, I think that the kids, and especially Apple Bloom, have given AJ some things to think about in this chapter.
And I take serious issue about what you said about This is why no one likes applejack as their favorite. Applejack has more fans than you think she does (Yours Truly included), and is the favorite of more folks than you know. (Again, I'm included in that.)
So before you make a broad statement like that, I'd advise you think it out better first.
Now, that said, is it your right to personally hate AJ? 'Course it is. I hate Discord myself, but that's my right, too.
Still, as I said, this is just a story, and I think we all need to remember that.
Hmmm wonder if this was arranged before hand. If not the meeting between these two is going to be interesting. Personally I am on Rainbow's side.
If everything that can go wrong will happen on this fic, then it's safe to assume that this might be a possible outcome.
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4814135 Personally I want someone to slug Applejack and for Applebloom to bring her crashing down to earth for all of her braggery and hypocrisy!
This chapter was amazing :D
Poor Rainbow Dash, I'm at her side in this, and I'm starting to reeeally dislike AppleJack
4814142 Quite possibly.
And I think that you're forgetting about Fluttershy being there, too, to deliver the class pet back to the schoolhouse. (Unless she chickens out on that. Which is probably likely. But we'll see.) So that makes three of them showing up there for their different reasons.
Although I figure that Flutters will probably hide while Dash and AJ throw down.
(If that's what happens, that is.)
4814186 Something tells me that that might just happen. Just have to wait and see, though, I guess.
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And Twilight, she's teaching the special extra class.
And the Derpy thing you said? Totally.
Also, that yeah-huh, nuh-uh part, was that a refrence to Emporers New Groove?
Also, GODAMMIT APPLEJACK YOU HIPPOCRITE!
oh yeah, and Twilight, too.
Wow, this fic makes me hate them more than I want to.
Still, this is one kick-ass fic you're weaving here! Good work, and I look forward to more!
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I believe you mean Applejackass.
Man, Rainbow is right. I'm on her side in this. I also like how this chapter hinted that Fluttershy is starting to think that Twilight may be wrong. I almost feel bad for what Rainbow is going to say to Applejack when it's revealed that the farm pony's been braggin' up a storm and being a hypocrite. Please rite the next chapter quickly!
Something tells me AJ doesn't know about Dash's past. Only Fluttershy knows and if AJ brings that up too Dash and saying bad things, Fluttershy might come too the defense of Rainbow.
Note: The way applejack is acting is her fault, but not why you think it is. She doesn't respond well to fame, that's all.
Just imagine, put yourself in her shoes. You are this backwoods farmer, the latest in a long lineage of thankless farmers, and suddenly you are being treated like the ground you walk on is bless'd. Anyone, including myself, would get an inflated ego. This is where AJ and RD differ big-time.
RD has groomed herself for this pretty much her entire life. She knows how to avoid it really getting to her head. That fact, alongside the fact that Ego is literally a core concept of RDs character, means that she is good for that kind of situation.
It's an example of ignorance in the Mane 6 that none of them seemed to notice or even listen to her bragging until she did it in a situation that anyone would be doing so.
And a good pony sticks close to her family,” Applejack said as she continued to impart her wisdom to her little sister. “Why, that lousy braggart came to Ponyville when she was eighteen years old, on her birthday! Just up and left her folks when she was finally old enough to start contibutin and payin em back fer all the hard work they put into raisin her!”
That one made me think... Is it THAT expected that Apple Bloom would come back and work the farm? I mean her talent is likely potion making or architecture -- neither of which would go well with her being a farm pony.
4814237 Yup, on both counts.
Having seen that movie myself, I think you're right. Those are totally Pacha's (or whatever the guy's name was (it's been long enough since I've seen it, I totally forgot his name, so i'm just basically guessing)) kids.
And I think that they're both being hypocrites.
(Although from what I can see from this chapter, Twilight's hurting in more ways than one.)
And I don't hate them in this fic (I can't; I just love them too darned much!), but I'm sure as heck not real happy with any of them! (I think that that's a given at this point.)
I think that the biggest gripe that I've always had with this episode is the mere fact that Twilight and the girls never once said,"hey, let's get her somewhere and just try talk to her first, and try to get some sense into her that way! Then if that doesn't work, we can resort to more extreme measures (like coming up with the idea of Mare-Do-Well) later if we have to."
Did they do that, though? Nooooooo. They were with the "let's upstage our best friend with a fake hero, and humiliate and embarrass her first! She'll thank us for it later." bit first, rather than just try to talk to her and use a little reason and common sense.
And Twilight's supposed to be a genius! She came off more like an idiot with this episode, and in this fic.
And now she's wondering why everything's gone south. Smart move, Twi.
But yeah, that above was my biggest caveat with the episode.
And I totally agree with you on that last bit! And I am, too!
Alright, Applejack is officially the worst pony in this story. Nothing about her makes me like her at all. From her sheer hypocrisy, to poisoning the minds of the foals, I've grown sick of her. At least Twilight and Fluttershy are, slowly, getting the picture that what they did was wrong. At this point, I really hope something really nasty happens to Applejack. I mean nasty. I'm talking levels where she loses everything because of her actions. Somepony, ANYPONY, slug her already and break her jaw already to shut her face.
Tomorrow is going to be very intense.
*My reaction to Applejack*
I fuckin' called it. You're on thin ice bitch.
Derpy, you have no idea how much good you've just done...Dinky'll do wonders for RD's mood.
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Until you realise that Fluttershy is gonna be there at the exact same time...
Along with Applejack...
4814471 I don't see Flutters starting anything, nor do I see RD starting anything WITH her. AJ however....
Oh gods..Poor Fluttershy..She was PRESSURED into it...?
Hell, she didn't even do much...
AJ is complete shit here. A no-good jackass whom thinks she is in the right. No matter what the fucking situation.
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Great. Now AJ's ego-swelling is affecting her family-life...now things are really going to fallout, and bad...
4814323 Even though AJ is my favorite pony,I'm gonna have to agree with you. I really do hope someone punches her across the face for what she's done...
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Well crap, Appkejack, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, and Twilight are all going to be at the school tomorrow... Well this won't end well.
Another comment here, wonder what Mac, Granny and Applebloom gonna too do about AJ? Heck sure it's good for business, but AJ's ego is soaring high! At least Dash maybe knows how too control her ego while AJ does not.
Looks like Mare Do Well continues to leave negative after-effects. Is Applejack slowly beginning to realize she's acting the same way she accused Rainbow of?
Monday is going to be interesting for these ponies.
For some reason I think this is going to end with AJ or RD in the hospital with several broken bones.
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She isn't acting the same way, she is acting even worse, at least RD didn't lie about the whole Nightmare Moon thing or badmouthed her friends.
They all need to learn something Gandalf the White said: the wise speak only of that which they know.....
Mare, not woman
4814135 meh I hate Pinkie Pie more
So come tomorrow afternoon, Rainbow Dash, Twilight, Applejack, and Fluttershy are all going to wind up at the school at the same time....
4814471 and Twilight. This is gonna be worse than Miley Cyrus at the TMA awards.
Good job AJ. Even if you all kiss and make up, you've just poisoned Ponyville for RD for a long, long, long time.
And now the Element of Honesty is probably going to do an Ark of the Covenant to AJ if she tries to use it again.
Also, five quatloos on someone arranging this meeting and another five on it being Celestia. A third five on the meeting just making things worse.
I wonder if the Elements are reflecting this? Losing color, cracking, exploding violently in the case of Honesty, or similar..
This is a ticking time bomb ready to go boom next chapter.
If I could ask one question to the Mane 5, it would be "When were you going to tell Rainbow Dash that you were all Mare-Do-Well?"
If they did it once or twice and then revealed themselves, I think I could have accepted it. Otherwise it looks like they were willing to keep on doing it until Rainbow crashed and burned herself out trying to keep up with MDW.
Or perhaps Rainbow Dash could have asked which one of them was the best MDW, leading to an argument between the others, showing that egocentricism can infect anyone.
dear god.
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What? someone had to post that gif!
Dun, dun, DUHHH! I'm practically glued to my inbox waiting for the next chapter. AJ vs RD.. Who will win? Only one way to find out: FIGHT!!!
please let RD win, please let RD win, please let RD win...
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Now that I think about it, you're right! I really wanna see some turmoil about that, in a fic (Maybe even this fic!) or possibly in an episode! That'd be some real juicy tension.
And remember, a good pony let’s her actions speak fer themselves, they don’t need to go yammerin on about how great they think are when nopony wants to hear it. Specially when it ain’t true!”
so applejack what does this say about you and how you are acting? are you a good pony? well going by your statement your not a good pony cause your NOT letting your actions speak for themselves, your ARE yammering about how great you think you are. and nobody wants to hear it and finally it especially IS NOT TRUE!
COMPARED TO YOU RAINBOW DASH IS CELESTIA!
So they start yelling at each other forcing Cheerilee to step in. Smack everyone with a ruler before sending them to time-out. I get the feeling she's going to talk sense into at least one pony.
4814571 Big Mac should knock some sense into her empty skull.
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little bit of a continuation from my last comment
Also I wonder if Twilight will confront Applejack over this
The little pegasus rolled her eyes. “Yeah right. Applejack told me she’s just does things so ponies will like her because she’s such an ego…ego-something. Fluttershy’s the real hero,” the little filly replied.
“What? Now, hold on a second, Rainbow’s got an ego, but I wouldn’t go that far,” Twilight mumbled while wondering just what the hay Applejack had told the fillies last night, or if it was something that had been so misconstrued as Fluttershy’s quest to ‘slay’ a dragon all those weeks ago. However, her soft words were apparently unheard, and the foal of a fan was already going on about another story in her hero’s legend.
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4814995 Blasphemy!