This story is a sequel to Trainer of Friendship
While on their way back from an evening to themselves, Princess Cadence and Shining Armor discover a scared little girl named Mavis, abandoned in an ally way in the Crystal Empire. After taking her to the Crystal Palace, Cadence sends a letter to her Aunt and sister in law and her friends to come and meet Mavis, and try to help her overcome all her sorrows and fears. After awhile, Cadence asks her aunt she would allow her to adopt Mavis as her own daughter. Can the crystal couple be the loving parents that Mavis deserves so much, or will Mavis' fears drive her away from Equestria? Read and find out!
Chapters (62)
Very nice! Althought I must admit, I miss her old surname and version where she was found crying already. Was somehow more dramatic. And with the age of four, I don't she would remember/know the mermaid thing, realistically speaking. Also, will this change affect your parents story?
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Probably
What’s the names of the stories that Serenity, Lucky Joy and Lopunny are in? There are some adopted stories I haven’t read before
Good work. Just to be sure, the only differences here is just the French language? I admit, part from the language, it's difficult to notice
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Serenity and Lucky Joy are from a story that another author wrote. I think the name was iCreator, or something to that nature. As for Lopunny, she was Serenity's first Pokémon that evolved in Journey Through Alola
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And the fact that Mavis is scared of humans
Very nice!
I like this edited version. I think the move to make Mavis a mermaid with a cybernetic prosthetic was a very interesting plot point. I hope it's touched upon at some point.
A French mermaid with an artificial arm? I'm starting to like the remake already.
Great work, thought the original was somehow more sad to me
Short but Good. Your Build in the Baby ponies Pretty well.
If you don't mind, mavis being French reminds me of a Story set in French i Made. And did you ever get my pm about the Story i did that was inspired by your ultimate Crossover Story?
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I did get the PM
Sounds good to me. Is it bad if I miss the original version?
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Not at all
Well, nice Work! I Kind of loved how the One Pokemon nested in her Head, will it be in the rewrite too? And for some reason i get a 404 Error Everytime i try to get to the chapter From the Mail i receive when you punish a new chapter
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That is a gimmick with Swablu. As for the error thing, it may just be something with your computer
At least Mavis has a decent Pokemon team to help defend herself with in addition to being emotional support.
Another well Made chapter.
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Thank you
Guess Mavis is going to experience the dark side of equinity soon enough.
Nice work!
I recognize Nathan and Will, but where do Raiden and his family come from?
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He, his 7 brothers and 1 sister were first introduced in Rise of the Titans, as well as their friends. In technicality, the Fujiyama Siblings are Japanese
Nice Work! The old Version with all Kids kidnapped and Coco kidnapped was also Good as well.
Nice work as always!
Nice Work.
Since when can the Pokemon talk?
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Translative Magic of Equestira. They first discovered it when Will first came to Equestria
Nice work!
I’ve got a bad feeling about that shadowy figure
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Yep. If you read the next few chapters, you'll know who he is
Look who we got here
Great Work as always!
Okay, now I can't stop imagining Nathan speaking like Gambit from the X-Men once he picks up Mavis's accent.
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Yep. Just wait until the next chapter! And what are your thoughts on my making Mavis part gorgon?
Sounds good
Nice Work as always.
Nice Work as always. This Time the Link worked but sent me to chapter 27
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What do you mean?
I see. Great Work as always and i got the 404 Error again
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Maybe something's just up with the site?
Nice work as always
why change her from human to French mermaid with artificial arm?
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It just came to me. Plus, she is now part Nymph and Gorgon
I miss the original version
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But you like this new version, yes?
Nice work!
interesting ideas and nice name!
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Yeah, had some trouble with finding names for the new Nymphs
Okay and great work!