Rise of Darkness

A darkness is settling over equestria.... one that can't even be stopped by celestia herself. when all is lost, not even Artemis Art can prevail over the darkness. Only a insecure but kind pegasus can.

Chapters (3)

The Dream · 2nd Aug 2014 · 750 words
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The Everfree Forest · 7th Aug 2014 · 673 words
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The Hospital??? · 13th Dec 2014 · 590 words
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Battle154

Battle154 #1 · Oct 31st, 2014 · · 5 · The Everfree Forest ·

Filly twilight.... *Sniffle* I....I chose Hospital.

staryoshi06

staryoshi06 #2 · Oct 31st, 2014 · 8 · 1 · The Everfree Forest ·

This is a trollfic...

right?

The Guardian and Friends

The Guardian and Friends #3 · Oct 31st, 2014 · 8 · 1 · The Everfree Forest ·

5208509

Well, it HAS a shitty cover art, so it HAS to be.

Sweetie Bat

Sweetie Bat #4 · Nov 1st, 2014 · · · The Everfree Forest ·

Zecorza... Why do I think car company with that spelling mistake?

ArtemisArt-Alicorn

ArtemisArt-Alicorn #5 · Nov 1st, 2014 · · 8 · The Everfree Forest ·

Spooky Guardian and Babs , I am working on getting a better cover art. sorry for the inconvience

Roarin Thunder

Roarin Thunder #6 · Nov 2nd, 2014 · 3 · · The Everfree Forest ·

This has been added to "Fuck!".

5211739 Get an editor man. Seriously. And a better idea might help too.

OozeLock

OozeLock #7 · Nov 2nd, 2014 · 5 · · The Everfree Forest ·

only one alicorn can help, Art. Artemis Art.

ArtemisArt-Alicorn

I have very bad feeling about this...

Leapingriver

Leapingriver #8 · Nov 2nd, 2014 · · 5 · The Everfree Forest ·

This was surprisingly entertaining...
And you actually did a pretty good job with Zecora's dialogue.

General Soarin

General Soarin #9 · Nov 2nd, 2014 · 4 · · The Everfree Forest ·

This gave me cancer. And aids. And ebola

Elric of Melnipony

Elric of Melnipony #10 · Nov 2nd, 2014 · 9 · · The Everfree Forest ·

Unnecessary/additional/non-canonical alicorn? Check.
Self-insert OC? Check.
OC is established as greater than a canon character?* Check.
User bio is in character? Check.
Said bio emphasizes the special-snowflakeness of the OC? Check.

Bonus Points:
- character name that doesn't sound like a pony
- story description doesn't capitalize anything except the OP OC's name
- story is somehow tagged as both a tragedy and a comedy, as if those styles can truly mix

Prediction: This is going to suck harder than Jupiter's gravity.
But I'm going to read it anyway so you don't have to.

*Faster than Rainbow Dash, better at magic than Twilight Sparkle, more powerful than Princess Celestia, etc.

Edit: It was worse than I thought.

BikerPon3