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We always tell ourselves to not dwell on the past. But what we do in the past marks us in the present and stays with us until we resolve it. And sometimes all we need is a little courage and love to overcome it.
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Hmm.
Interesting.
I want more.
Love it!
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Thanks y'all. I'll be getting another chapter done soon, so don't expect me to keep ya hanging!
The feels are real. My God!
I want to read more of this!
Interesting story.
Oooh, a new chapter coming soon? Can hardly wait!
You know, when I saw the title of your fic, it reminded me of one that I am going to write. Except the story is about Sunset Shimmer and Twilight.Just in case you're interested.
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I like the mixed emoticons you have there. Is that how you felt?
Yeah, I have the next two chapters laid out in my head like a blueprint, as I like to say. I hope to have them done soon.
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Thanks. I usually like to make an emoticon combo with Twi-Dash-Flutters-and Pinkie. Well, close enough to it I guess.
Sweet.
I believe the most appropriate song for this situation would be Quest (This Can't be All) by BlackGryph0n and Baasik. Emphasis on THIS CAN'T BE ALL.
This is very good. I do love me a little OctaScratch (if that IS where this is heading)
From my brief glance I didnt notice any spelling or grammar errors.
My only complaint is tgat it ws far too short for my liking.
Anyways I am thoroughly enjoying this and I hope to see more
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I'm working on chapter three today, and I hope to have it done by Wednesday. If not by Wednesday, then hopefully sometime this week.
Another amazing chapter, to the favourites it goes!
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Thanks. I finally had a chance to collaborate with a pre-reader and edit this chapter. It was practically sitting on my computer for two months now. Thought I'd at least post the thing.
Very nice. Happy to see this continuing. It's a rather nice take on these two very awesome ponies.
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Thanks
Now that I'm back into the rhyme and rhythm of my writing, I should be dumping out another chapter soon.
“You’re gonna shot be with that? You gotta be joking,"
Shoot me?
Other than that, this story deserves more attention hehe
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I'm glad you liked it, and I did make that change, thanks for noticing.
What do you think of Bulldozer, eh? He's walking hell flames. I only ask this so I can develop my characters more, avoiding Mary sues.
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), as a character pretty solid. Honostly only character which is hard to understand for me sometimes is Jazzmere, well more th interaction with Octavia and him, but I suspect it will become more clear later on.
Oh well felt him to be threatening enough to make me fear for th next chapters (which is a good thing i guess
Also walking hell flames? Is that an expression or something?
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Yeah, Jazzmere is a very complicated character when it comes to interaction with Octavia, though that had not been my initial intention. And I do promise his character will become clearer as I write more chapters.
He's the type of character that gets you thinking about what his motives are.
And as for the walking hell flames, it's a metaphor I just randomly thought of when I posted the comment XD.
I am loving the story so far! Great job!
I believe that this should say "What did he say to you?"
Other than that, great story. Keep up the great work.
If anyone were to take advice from me, this is what I would wish it to be.
That it matters not what others may say. What matters most is the passion you put into your work, day by day.
-Scuba12
Ah i missed this
to think that?
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To think that.
Thanks for spotting out that minor detail/error.
Also, I hoped you enjoyed this chapter. Chapter seven is completed, and all it needs is to edited.
Yay vinyl! Why didn't octy play?!
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I don't understand what you mean, bud.
Personally, I like fics with families in them. So I'm going to give this a go later on today!
Sir, I have a good feeling about this fic!
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Hey, thanks a lot, bud. I really appreciate it.
How you described the house of Octavia...
NOW I WANT A HOUSE LIKE THAT!
So far I like it! So have a thumb up!
Jeesz Jazzmere sure took a turn for the worst didn't he? Grinning while shoving his daughter and best friend out the door like that. Well I never liked him anyway, good riddance!
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He certainly did. And I believe most people didn't like him. And all for good reason.
in the beginning:
You missed an 'a' there.
( Small note to self: Left halfway of the chapter. Because I needed to go and had not enough time to finish.)
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Oh, thanks for dropping by; I'm glad you're liking it.
And I went over my draft, but I don't see what you mean. Could you say again?
So no public schooling in Equestria, then? Huh, rampant illiteracy amongst the lower class to solidify the sense of superiority held by the upper class doesn't seem like something Celestia would let fly so easily.
pummeled
three
Bloody Knuckles? What were his parent's thinking? Ponies don't even have knuckles!
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Hey, thanks for spotting those errors out. I corrected them. And to be honest, you're not wrong with Celestia letting something like that fly so easily, but you have to remember, it's a story and how you interpret it. It doesn't necessarily have to abide by the canon rules completely.
So octavos holds some sort of resentment for her father which can easily be transferred to vinyl and dusty.
One thing I have to say is the scenes go by way too fast.