Hey, guess what having the day off gave me time to finish! Whew. That was very, very hard to write, both emotionally and in authorial terms... but hopefully the pace will pick up from here.
Damn. Sad ending is Sad. Of course, since this fic isn't complete yet, something's gonna go wrong. A confrontation with the mysterious second stalker, bumping into 'Shy as she delivers the final letter, or someone finding said letter before it can be delivered are what I've thought of so far. Although I'm sure there are plenty more possibilities. Either way, looking forward to what happens next.
I am incredibly torn... This is the first explicit fan fic I've tried to read (just finished chapter 2). On one hand, the story is amazing. On the other, it's really hard to imagine/read about the MLP characters in... that way.
Part of me wants to read more... and part of me wants to devote my life to developing the neuralyzer from Men in Black to try and erase it from my mind. Seeing as how only one of those things is physically/scientifically possible, I guess I'll just have to read more.
857157 Thank you! As I said in an earlier comment, I find Rarity one of the most interesting heads to get into. What's funny is, I also have a Rarijack story I'd like to tell after I finish this fic, which is obviously completely incompatible with this one. But I think I'm going to have to go write something else first to refresh my brain first. Fortunately I have four or five other ideas to work on...
That was hard to write? I can imagine, because this was hard to read. I was silently hoping the letter would indeed look strong and to the point, but leave a faint trace of tears. It tells you oh-so much about how hard it was to write such a letter.
This is so incredibly sad- I honestly have no idea what ending this will have. Rarity's internal struggle with her own selfworth over her actions, and on top of that seemingly unrequited love? Breaks my heart! Lovely job! I would favourite this twice if I could.
858002 That's the name that mlp.wikia.com assigned to the telegram pony from The Last Roundup. Mr. Zippy is the older one that Fluttershy chews out in Putting Your Hoof Down.
I was looking at the feature box after I read for sumthing nice and then I focused on Fluttershy staring back at me in an innocent shyness then I noticed the way the other pony looks like she's looking at her and I lol'd anyway do you think you could give a small preview like a paragraph or two maybe an essay's worth if your generous since you write a lot this might take a while for an update but still even though I expect you NOT to I just gutta say "KEEP WRITING!" your awesome and you are one of the few epic writers I have found and tracked (like a stalker) on this web and you have inpired me to get working on MY fanfic just like 2 others keep rockin'!!!
Thank Celestia this showed up in the Featured Box. I don't know if I would have ever stumbled across it otherwise. (And never stumbling across and reading this wonderful story would be the Worst. Possible. Thing! )
Right, went through the other chapters a tad bit quicker than I had expected heh. Really love the story and set up so far. It's IC enough to be believable, and I the the conflicts that spring up. And gah, was going to comment on something I really liked around 1-3 chapters back, but now it slipped my mind might have been the semi-squirting part. But I think it was some dialogue or something...
Anyhow, uh, do know I tried to write some kind of positive critique and stuff. My syndromes just hinders me a bit, and I tend to jump from formal to informal. My way of speech and compliments just tend to be very well, oddly phrased at times It's hard to find stories like this. And especially ones that are more vivid(?) with female arousal descriptions as said, especially ones that also have good masturbation, it's actually quite rare to stumble upon. Personally don't see it as much problem to keep quiet though, but each and their own heh.
856787 Well, if you could get a prototype of the Neuralyzer (the De-Neuralyzer restores lost memory) working, I'd happily buy it (shame it's beyond our capabilities in the given time period) But yes, continue reading, it was wierd fror me at first, it gets easier.
This was a really cool story. I would have to say my favorite parts would be where Rarity is scolding herself for her motivations to spend time with Fluttershy.
this is so great, the struggle of rarity, fluttershys reactions, everything is perfect, can't find a thing to critizise. keep it up, can't wait for the next chapter
The rest is Steam PuB with Vampony Chronicles(50%)and Sweetest Gem (15%) I meant 45% for you your a great inpiration with so many fans such great amounts of awesome
Congratulations. I am usually capable of determining the ending this far into and story, but it seems as though I can not figure out what this ending holds. This is very well written, and I am looking forward to the ending, I just hope that it ends similar to the way I am imagining it, but I won't know until you release it. Is there an estimated time of release that you could possibly tell us. If not that is okay, just a little curious to find out what really happens between the two of them and who the other admirer is (most likely Dash because of how she acted). Thank you for this fabulous story!
868183 'fraid not, I kind of write as the mood strikes. I believe there's about 4 chapters left, though. And I think you may find yourself revising your predictions after this coming chapter...
868291 Ah okay I understand completely, I feel like I write my best when I am in the mood. That's good to hear, can't wait for the next chapter then. I am looking forward to it.
Can't believe I never got around to really sitting down and reading this story in its entirety until now! *happy sigh* It's sooo good...
When I read the premise I almost felt like I'd totally stolen your ideas for my own fic, what with the adorable Flarity and frilly underthings and such. But your execution is very different, of course. And your writing is much more creative, and... more gooder.
873568 It's really funny you say that, because reading the latest chapter of "Bechdel's Law", I kept thinking to myself, "Celestia dammit, why can't I write Fluttershy with that perfect mix of shyness and excitement?"
Hey, guess what having the day off gave me time to finish!
Whew. That was very, very hard to write, both emotionally and in authorial terms... but hopefully the pace will pick up from here.
Damn. Sad ending is Sad.
Of course, since this fic isn't complete yet, something's gonna go wrong. A confrontation with the mysterious second stalker, bumping into 'Shy as she delivers the final letter, or someone finding said letter before it can be delivered are what I've thought of so far. Although I'm sure there are plenty more possibilities.
Either way, looking forward to what happens next.
I am incredibly torn... This is the first explicit fan fic I've tried to read (just finished chapter 2). On one hand, the story is amazing. On the other, it's really hard to imagine/read about the MLP characters in... that way.
Part of me wants to read more... and part of me wants to devote my life to developing the neuralyzer from Men in Black to try and erase it from my mind. Seeing as how only one of those things is physically/scientifically possible, I guess I'll just have to read more.
Holy crap, 40+ new Favs in under three hours? Did I hit the Feature box or something?
...yep, I guess I did.
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Well, here's to hoping you go with the former option. Thanks for reading!
Rarity is just beautifully written here. Really seems like you've gotten into her head, so to speak. And how much she cares for Fluttershy...
Hi, I'm one of those new Favs.
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Thank you! As I said in an earlier comment, I find Rarity one of the most interesting heads to get into.
What's funny is, I also have a Rarijack story I'd like to tell after I finish this fic, which is obviously completely incompatible with this one. But I think I'm going to have to go write something else first to refresh my brain first. Fortunately I have four or five other ideas to work on...
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That was hard to write? I can imagine, because this was hard to read. I was silently hoping the letter would indeed look strong and to the point, but leave a faint trace of tears. It tells you oh-so much about how hard it was to write such a letter.
Strong ending. I liked it very much :3
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You know it's not over yet, right? I'm working on chapter 8 as we speak.
Ouch.
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yeah yeah I know, I meant the ending of the chapter
I'm the silly pony for wording it that way
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Oh, okay, Whew.
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Uhhh... thanks?
This is so incredibly sad- I honestly have no idea what ending this will have.
Rarity's internal struggle with her own selfworth over her actions, and on top of that seemingly unrequited love?
Breaks my heart! Lovely job! I would favourite this twice if I could.
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Well played, gotta love punctuating each sarcastic smash to the face with a perfectly applicable show reference hyperlink. -not sarcasm-
images2.fanpop.com/image/photos/12500000/Gif-of-Joker-Clapping-the-dark-knight-12559610-150-150.gif
My apologies, I didn't think of it that way when reading through it.
I saw the name Post Haste in there.
That's the name I gave my mailpony OC in my stories.
Not sure if coincidence...
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That's the name that mlp.wikia.com assigned to the telegram pony from The Last Roundup. Mr. Zippy is the older one that Fluttershy chews out in Putting Your Hoof Down.
I was looking at the feature box after I read for sumthing nice and then I focused on Fluttershy staring back at me in an innocent shyness then I noticed the way the other pony looks like she's looking at her and I lol'd anyway do you think you could give a small preview like a paragraph or two maybe an essay's worth if your generous since you write a lot this might take a while for an update but still even though I expect you NOT to I just gutta say "KEEP WRITING!"
your awesome and you are one of the few epic writers I have found and tracked (like a stalker) on this web and you have inpired me to get working on MY fanfic just like 2 others keep rockin'!!!
I'm so glad this is still marked as incomplete; it cant end like this!
Thank Celestia this showed up in the Featured Box. I don't know if I would have ever stumbled across it otherwise. (And never stumbling across and reading this wonderful story would be the Worst. Possible. Thing! )
I'm getting the feeling that while Fluttershy is being freaked out by the 'secret admirer' letters, she is herself genuinely into Rarity.
Right, went through the other chapters a tad bit quicker than I had expected heh. Really love the story and set up so far. It's IC enough to be believable, and I the the conflicts that spring up. And gah, was going to comment on something I really liked around 1-3 chapters back, but now it slipped my mind might have been the semi-squirting part. But I think it was some dialogue or something...
Anyhow, uh, do know I tried to write some kind of positive critique and stuff. My syndromes just hinders me a bit, and I tend to jump from formal to informal. My way of speech and compliments just tend to be very well, oddly phrased at times It's hard to find stories like this. And especially ones that are more vivid(?) with female arousal descriptions as said, especially ones that also have good masturbation, it's actually quite rare to stumble upon. Personally don't see it as much problem to keep quiet though, but each and their own heh.
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A small paragraph of what? For what purpose? I'm sorry, I don't understand...
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OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRR
"Manually"
aaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwww yeaaaaaaaa
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I meant like a sneak peek at the next ya know?
856787 Well, if you could get a prototype of the Neuralyzer (the De-Neuralyzer restores lost memory) working, I'd happily buy it (shame it's beyond our capabilities in the given time period)
But yes, continue reading, it was wierd fror me at first, it gets easier.
Sad cliffhanger(Celestia DAMN you for that) is sad.
Yet another chapter has Rarity delaying the inevitable! It's going to be hard to wait for chapter eight. I tremble with antici—
Dear Goddess! WHAT 7 LETTERS?! "Good bye" or "I'm sorry"?! Frankly it needs both!
858002 Hehehehe Ponies gonna think your OC is changeling. Oh and, when you gonna update that one again?!
My reactions as this story has progressed:
Hmm, interesting concept
Wow, this is really good. I'm hooked!
Oh no this doesn't look good!
And this is now in my top 3 most carefully watched stories! Can't wait to see where it goes!
Can't wait for the next one
This was a really cool story. I would have to say my favorite parts would be where Rarity is scolding herself for her motivations to spend time with Fluttershy.
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I wish people would stop saying "was"... it's still an "is"! We're not done here!
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Good point. Sorry bout that.
this is so great, the struggle of rarity, fluttershys reactions, everything is perfect, can't find a thing to critizise.
keep it up, can't wait for the next chapter
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I'll think about it.
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Nice your awesome thanx for sum inspiration in writing you take up my 35% in inpiration
The rest is Steam PuB with Vampony Chronicles(50%)and Sweetest Gem (15%) I meant 45% for you
your a great inpiration with so many fans such great amounts of awesome
Vinyl kicked The crusaders off cuz das HER job [Pic not working here is link]
http://images5.fanpop.com/image/photos/30700000/Animated-Filly-Vinyl-Scratch-my-little-pony-friendship-is-magic-30730570-621-526.gif
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Would you mind keeping this sort of thing in your personal blog instead of my story comments?
Still beautiful, still amazing and I'm still loving it. Keep up the great work.
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Yea sorry
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Welcome to Pony Hell, don't enjoy your stay.
Por dios esta historia es maravillosa...
Congratulations. I am usually capable of determining the ending this far into and story, but it seems as though I can not figure out what this ending holds.
This is very well written, and I am looking forward to the ending, I just hope that it ends similar to the way I am imagining it, but I won't know until you release it. Is there an estimated time of release that you could possibly tell us. If not that is okay, just a little curious to find out what really happens between the two of them and who the other admirer is (most likely Dash because of how she acted). Thank you for this fabulous story!
From hell, to you, and back again,
Soto Konoha
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'fraid not, I kind of write as the mood strikes. I believe there's about 4 chapters left, though. And I think you may find yourself revising your predictions after this coming chapter...
868291 Ah okay I understand completely, I feel like I write my best when I am in the mood. That's good to hear, can't wait for the next chapter then. I am looking forward to it.
Cant wait for more!!!!
You have almost made me cry.
Anyway, i check back every day to see if it was updated.
Sometimes even more often
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Hehe... well, it'll be several days at least. Ch. 8 is currently about a page of text and a list of notes.
Can't believe I never got around to really sitting down and reading this story in its entirety until now! *happy sigh* It's sooo good...
When I read the premise I almost felt like I'd totally stolen your ideas for my own fic, what with the adorable Flarity and frilly underthings and such. But your execution is very different, of course. And your writing is much more creative, and... more gooder.
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It's really funny you say that, because reading the latest chapter of "Bechdel's Law", I kept thinking to myself, "Celestia dammit, why can't I write Fluttershy with that perfect mix of shyness and excitement?"