Whew. Chapter 6, finally up.
This should teach you to never believe anything I say about how long something will take.

And then everything got real

Oh snap!

Calling it; the other secret admirer is Big Mac.

Ho boy, exciting :3

What a cliff-hanger: I eagerly await the next chapter

The secret admirer is Derpy. She and Fluttershy have so much in common, after all.

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What? It's clearly Dash, the only one who would use the phrase "Really gorgeous" when she's trying to be romantic.

Or Spike, but Spike's heart already belongs to another pony.

Whoah...that's gonna complicate matters significantly.

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As much as I'd love it to be Dash, she'd use "hot."

And besides, she already knows about the whole Secret Admirer thing, so sending another letter with the same signature would be weird.

Reading your story is like sliding into a tub of hot water with my girlfriend, snuggling and eating dark chocolate with soft caramel centers. It leaves me feeling slightly aroused, wanting and needing more. This is simply wonderful work.

Keep it up.

FF

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How oddly specific...

759442 It's comforting to know that I'm not the only one working on ValvE time.

Okay, that was awesome.

Initially I thought this entire thing was solely about Rarity and how she would eventually work up the courage to confess to Fluttershy. But now you've revealed that there is a rival secret admirer?! Kudos good sir.

And now a word from Rarity:

Of all the worst possible things that could happen this is THE. WORST. POSSIBLE. THING!

Okay, two guesses. One; either someone else is interested in Fluttershy, or two; someone has figured out Rarity is, and is trying to goad her into making a move. Those are my best guesses.

god, jiggety, i could hug you for this great story. the setting, the details, raritys fantasies/daydreams and fluttershys...
well "fluttershyness" (nice word, huh? :) )

i wish i could vote up more than once... i really enjoy reading this, cant wait for the next chapter, but i dont want to put you under pressure, take youre time and make it as brilliant as the other chapters
god i'm talking to much...

keep up the great work, i love it

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You really don't know how much that means to me.
Thank you!

Heh, was that a Bunnicula reference? I remember liking those books when I was younger.

Oh, and the rest of the story was great as usual. I more than half expected Rarity to get caught, I must say. And now a new Secret Admirer makes Rarity's confession that much more difficult. The plot thickens.

Ah, the humble cliffhanger. You haunt me so.

Another chapter well done, as if the other comments to the affirmative weren't enough evidence. Though I can't help but wonder who this new secret admirer is. Maybe RD, or Big Mac?
Maybe they aren't actually a secret admirer, but someone who's trying to get Rarity to make a move out of desperation.
Funny, that.

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Sure was! Very, very thinly veiled.

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Oh, neither -- it's Sweetie Belle. Oops, was that a spoiler?

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Alright, alright, you don't have to taunt me.

Rainbow Dash, she left the letter. because fuck logic

Well, its gotta be one of the other four; unless Fluttershy shared the secret admirer note with somepony else. Or I suppose its a completely unrelated secret admirer with coincidental timing. Or fluttershy wrote the note herself as some sort of test of Rarity's reaction! Shoot. I guess there are more than a few possibilities...

Obviously, the note was sent by Rarity's evil twin sister, Common!

NO, its Pinkie Pie
she just wanted to mess with Rarity

Moar... Moar! MOAR. GAHHHHH cliffhanger ending of DOOOOOM.

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That is all

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Oh, dear, it seems you've hotlinked something you can't hotlink.

813833.....fuck

Ok shit just got real and it had a picture of a fish from spongebob with a serious face.

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No, FunnyJunk has not changed their hotlinking policy in the last five minutes.

i would like to guess that it's Dash, simply because the note is to-the-point and reeks of a pony that doesn't express her feelings outwardly.

Your work is superb in every respect, Jiggety. One thing I especially like is Rarity's internal dialogue. You convey such intense disgust and self-loathing beneath Rarity's prim and proper exterior in so few words that it hits home in a poignant yet artistic fashion. I daresay that you weave magic in your writing that continues to entice and make me want more.

Keep up the great work! I look forward to the next installment!

Woah, I am about 10 lines into this chapter an my last comment is now looking really ignorant. Sorry about that. Should have trusted in the author to come up with a reasonable plot development to cover it.

Anyway, my money is on Dash. Whether she is going to try and screw up the other Secret Admirer or just contribute.... No idea.

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she DID say "there's this pony"...

STILL....wat a

Wow! The first Bunicula reference I had ever seen! Good job!

You lost me....

This is getting gooooood. I wonder who sent that.

...
Must read next chapter.

Oh RD. Why you gotta ruin Rarity's day?

Shit just got real.

759690 didn´t you ever heard of imitators?
knowing other will take the suspicion, rely on hiding behind another identity

The plot thickens!

Bunnicula!!!!!! Fave books as a kid...I know this fic is complete ...but just wanted to tell u that it is awesome and definetly worthy of all the praise it has received!!

"Oh, yes. It's the first book in a series about a vampire rabbit who sucks the juice out of vegetables." She lowered her voice conspiratorially and added, "I think it's kind of scary for a little bunny, but he really seems to enjoy it."

What the deuce? I haven't thought about Bunicula in YEARS. Shit, I think I might still have a copy somewhere...

Ok, this has officially got to the point where I skip over the clop scenes to get to more plot.

Bunpire? Holy crap, you read Bunnicula when you were little too?!

I seem to recall the antagonist being Rainbow Dash. I think it's a bit of an unnecessary addition to the drama, and the story would do fine without it. But we'll see where this goes anyways.

I'm really glad I have a chance to read this again. It's every bit as good as I remember.

bunnicula reference ftw