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Not After What You Did! - marineproductions100



Gilda tries to get Rainbow Dash back, but Dash hates her too much to take her back.

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Not After What You Did!

NOT AFTER WHAT YOU DID!

Written By: Cameron

Taking advantage of people will make them hate you!

Rainbow Dash walked through the marketplace with a follower. This follower wasn't any other follower. It was Gilda. She kept pestering Rainbow Dash about their breakup and has been trying to get the two back together, but Dash can't forgive Gilda for what she did to her and her friends the last time Gilda came.

Gilda has tried for several weeks now. Another week and it'll be a month and Dash can't deal with it. Anger was increasingly rising within her, but she tried to ignore the thing that was following her. She didn't want to deal with her, but she had a feeling that she will, no matter what. "Why won't you give me a second chance, Dash?" Gilda asked, for the umpteenth time.

Rainbow Dash turned around and looked her straight in the eyes. "Why won't you take no for an answer, Gilda?" She asked, with venom spitting at her.

Gilda tasted the raw venom that attacked her. Her immediate instinct was to fight back. She stepped forward at the pegasus. "I'm trying to change, but I can't change unless you take me back. You keep being a bitch about this for no reason at all."

"I'm being a bitch? You care to repeat that and tell me why I'm acting this way?" A few eyes looked over at the two.

"It may have been because I had an outburst at that lame party we were at, but that lame pink menace kept on bothering me and getting in between us."

"She wasn't getting in between us, she was trying to stop you from being such a bitch. She needed to put an end to your attitude. The same one that you carry with you up to this moment. So quit being a bitch and get over it!"

Gilda put her face in front of Dash's. "Care to repeat that?"

"No! You bucking heard me!" Dash pushed her forehead onto Gilda's.

The anger made the air tense and all eyes were on the two. Silence filled the air. Making everypony still as the two kept staring at each other with daggers as eyes.

"You were supposed to love me, Dash." Gilda pulled her face away. She took a couple steps back from her opponent.

Dash giggled. "I was supposed to love you. I was supposed to love you? You think I'm your soul mate, huh? You're wrong, Gilda. I'm not your true love. That's some bullshit fairy tale caused by your bullshit drama!"

"So your saying that our love was a waste of time? It wasn't necessary?"

"Yes!" The pegasus screamed.

Gilda stepped back. "Who can be more awesome than me, huh? Who would wanna waste their time with you, Dash? I bet you that none of these losers in this crowd would want to deal with you." She huffed at her.

"You're wrong. There is somepony who would put up with me." Dash grinned widely. "Fluttershy." She turned around and saw her yellow friend standing a few feet away from her. All eyes turned on the animal caretaker and she shyly smiled. Dash looked back at the angry griffon. "She can put up with me better than you and she treats me right." The cyan pegasus walked up to the yellow pegasus and wrapped a wing around her. A little blush formed on the animal caretaker's face.

"I can treat you right!" Gilda spit back.

"Bucking me doesn't count! You always treated me wrongly. Fluttershy doesn't. She treats me the way how I want to be treated. She listens to me, when I have a bad day. She holds me, when I remember all the horrible things that have happened in my past. Least of all, she bucks better than you."

There was a loud gasp that went through the crowd. Fluttershy's light blush turned into a bright crimson. She lowered her head and hid her face under Dash's wing. "I wish you didn't say that last part," she whispered quietly.

Rainbow Dash looked down at her marefriend and smiled slyly. "Sorry. I'll make it up later tonight. Whatever you want." She whispered. She brought her attention back to the griffon. "I can't ask for anypony more special than her."

"You won't take me back because your with that whore?" This comment sent more anger to Rainbow Dash and she immediately act.

Rainbow Dash flew towards Gilda and hit her off of her paws. Sending the griffon right through the crowd. Luckily, everypony dodged the mass just in time. She got back up and showed shock plain on her face. She looked at the pegasus with such amazement.

"Don't ever call her that!" Dash barked. She walked towards the griffon and grabbed her by the neck. "When I say this, listen carefully. Don't ever come back or I will beat you through this wall!" She punched the griffon in the face and walked away from the crowd with Fluttershy.

Gilda got back up and saw the couple leaving, hoof in hoof. She watched them walk until they were out of eyesight. Everypony around her started to walk away from the griffon and continued their normal lives.

Gilda decided that she wasn't going to torment herself anymore. She finally realized that she'll never get Rainbow Dash back and that's that. So she spread her wings and flew home. Alone.

THE END

Written By: Cameron

Hate does not just form by actions, but by people as well.

Author's Note:

I may have felt a twinge of anger when I listened to that song. I may have decided to write a story about it. I may have wrote down feelings I felt about this girl who took advantage of me. Also to all those who put themselves in front of others: You're no better than anyone so don't act like that! If you want respect, you have to earn it. You can't demand it and do something that hurts others or take advantage of them! Have a heart and care for the ones you fucked over!

Comments ( 29 )

I recommend romance tag

Uh... yeah... you should really rewrite this at least for all the typo... it was actually pretty hard to read at times. :derpyderp2:

Gilda stepped back. "Who can be more awesome than me, huh?

Me!

4827585
Nope. I'm superior.

4828875 Wrong I AM SUPERIOR :trixieshiftleft:

4829942
I AM MORE SUPERIOR THAN YOU! ....Is your profile picture for real?

4835094 WHAT DO YOU MEAN AND I AM THE MOST SUPERIOR!! :trixieshiftleft:

4835381
I AM WAY MORE SUPERIOR THAN YOU WILL EVER BE!

4835642 I AM THE MOST SUPERIOR BEING IN THE UNIVERSE AND ANY OTHER UNIVERSES BOW DOWN TO ME!!!!!

4835869
I AM MORE HOLY AND SUPERIOR THAN ANYBODY AND EVERYBODY IN EVERY SINGLE MULTIVERSE TO EVER EXIST IN ANY WAY POSSIBLE!

RAWR

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4827585

I'm gonna need some fucking popcorn. :twilightsmile: This is gonna be good. *sits down with a foldable chair with a bowl of popcorn*

4840866 I AM MORE SUPERIOR THAN WHAT EVER YOU SAY!!! RRAAWWRR

4841210 you're lucky i have no camera
btw I AM MORE SUPERIOR THAN YOU!!!!!

4841293 yep~
have you ever played crysis 2?

4841607 bored! how 'bout you?

4841619
I was up until 3 AM.

4843852 I was up until 4:53 trying to go to sleep it was hard to hear my music over my brother playing minecraft

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