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chief maximus


Why do I write? Because I can't draw! I write mainly as an outlet, and don't take it too seriously. If you like what I write, awesome! If not, that's cool too.

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The spirit of madness learned his lesson after those pesky ponies re-sealed him in his stone tomb. This time around there would be no princess Celestia, no elements of harmony, and most important of all, no magic of friendship. His plan was to tear the kingdom apart at the seams, and this time, his scheme was perfect. An infinite jest that was to be the jewel in his chaotic crown. Equestria would be torn asunder and his sweet insanity would rule the land once again until the end of time.

Chapters (25)
Comments ( 357 )

Woah you did post it! i'm tracking this just because i can!

:rainbowderp: I'm intrigued! Very good writing, I can't wait for the next!

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Thanks! I'm glad ya liked it, chapter 2 should be out in a few days.

This... This is amazing! I can't wait for chapter 2.
Really, really good writing, and with Discord aswell. :heart::rainbowkiss:

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Thanks super much!! Discord has always been a fascinating character to me so I thought it was high time I gave him a starring antagonist role. next chap will be out in a few days!:rainbowkiss:

But... But... He [i doesn't turn ponies to stone. He said that himself!

But... But... He doesn't turn ponies to stone. He said that himself!

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Who would have thought the god of disharmony would lie?:twilightsheepish:

sorry, i have to do this...

DOUBLE RAINBOOM!:pinkiegasp: DOUBLE RAINBOOM ALL THE WAY!!!!

how to get ponies to party......use the royal canterlot speaking voice.

22421 You mean the

TRADITIONAL ROYAL CANTERLOT VOICE?

This story could get interesting, and fast.

Awwww this chapter was just...AWWW!!

Adorable, though the necrotic moon laser of concentrated evil kind of spoiled the atmosphere. You've definitely got me intrigued. I look forward to seeing where you go with this.

is there going to be other pairs?

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I tried to remember how Luna escaped in the first episode, and that's pretty much what I recalled (not exactly obviously). while it did kill the mood a touch i'll admit it is essential to move the plot forward. Thanks for the honesty! :derpytongue2:

:twilightsmile: So Big Mac, are we going to put this story on our Track list?
:eeyup: Eeyup.

:trixieshiftright: If Granny Smith stands in the way of love, she may have to suffer an unfortunate... accident.

sorry but I wont be reading this anymore because of shipping

Comment posted by chief maximus deleted Dec 17th, 2014

Ordinarily I stop reading fics with an entire chapter of shipping, but this has Discord, so there's an exception.
Still, appledash is sort of predictable in almost any fic, and it's written pretty well here.

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thanks, Discord's fun starts next chapter.

Eh, you're just lucky I like "what if they found out I'm a fillyfooler?" AppleDash shipping, lol.

(Yes, it's sad that that's a particular trope that's happened enough for me to become a fan of it, isn't it? :ajsmug:)

Along with the great story-telling, you also have the most enjoyable author's notes that I've ever read, haha

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Your avatar...may be the funniest one I've seen to date. also glad you enjoyed the shippage. my other ship would have involved Twilight, but in this fic, she's already down with the big mac.

24951 I reeeeeeaallly wish I could take credit for the image, but I found it in my giant pony image folder one day. On the other hand, I think I may be the only person to use it as much as I have, lol. I mean, I run an ask tumblr as Carlestia, for the goddess' sake! An unsuccessful ask blog with like only 15 questions, but an ask blog nonetheless.

Also, review-wise, I'm very interested to see where this goes. You really are playing up the malevolent version of Q here with Discord (at least Dream-Discord) and I can't wait to see where this goes.

Brilliant. Just brilliant. Massive Discord fan eagerly waiting for more.

Brilliant. Just brilliant. Massive Discord fan eagerly waiting for more.

This Discord fan can't wait for a chapter with lots of Discord! With your story telling it's going to be amazing!:raritystarry:

Is it just me, or does the diolouge seem to switch back and forth in weird ways? It has really confusing switches between characters.

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How do you mean? between AJ and RD? or everyone in general?

sigh...3...2...1..
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUU

I need more before I go into withdrawal.

WAT.
(Dreams DO come true! ...shit...)

BUM BUM BA DUUUUUUUUUUUUU~!

Awesome, just awesome, fantastic writing, excellent plot, keep them coming! :rainbowlaugh:

I've gotta say, you do an excellent portrayal of Discord! I still think he's a bit of a dick, but you selected an interesting character to work with for sure. I require moar!:yay:

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yes, I must admit I had to ramp up his dickishness a touch fot this fic, but I'm glad it's being positively received!:twilightsmile:

Man, you stopped RIGHT when it was getting awesome. NEED MOAR FIC.

So wait...is Discord gonna be the good guy in this? interesting :rainbowhuh:

INB4 they all hate her. Keep up the good work!

wait, so was the story he told true or not?

ARG! CONFOUND THAT GOD IS CHAOS!

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