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Equestria. A happy and peaceful land, surely nothing can go wrong, right? Wrong. Ever since Luna's banishment, ponies join the Lunar Republic and rebel against Princess Celestia. And this starts to tear the friendship of the mane 6 apart. Who will win? Will peace be finally restored and Princess Luna and Princess Celestia join together again? Or will this fight end up into a war?
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I honestly thing it should be the real celestia doing this. You know war and all. Maybe not the 'I'm awesome' part though. Good start, but I am not so sure about that Red changeling at all. But of course I shall give you a like and a fave. X
Awww. Why did you spoil that the Celestia was a fake?
Happy because Luna is best pony.
*looks at word count*
Meh
Also, I don't see much of a reason for Celestia to create the solar empire. Meh. I guess it will be explained in a later chapter.
Good luck finishing this story, and try some plot twists. You're on the right way.
The story was very rushed, with several descriptions seeming jerky.
Was Luna not banished in the first place?
Also, what is with the NLR vs SE fascination?
You should have made it where they feed off lust.
4791046 Hmmmm. Nah
4791653 I am talking from a alternate d imension where catus run wild and humans are stupid as shït and you could kill absolutly everything.
4791747 Wat.
4791803 Stupid ass shit happens over at my dimension like flying whales.
4791803 you want a screen shoot idea. You can put princess luna and celestia pissed off at each other.
Hmm... This seems like an interesting story. It's gonna be hard to end though, making one side win will just piss off the people wanting NLR/SEto win, Alternate endings?
4797211 Maybe. IDK but I'm on the NLR so the chance of that winning is high
I also think you perhaps should have left a bit to the imagination as far as who is pulling the strings a bit. Still looking forward to where this will head.
Hey, bro, you need an editor for some parts. Improper grammar, bad punctuation, stuff like that. Let me know If you'd care for some help. PM, though.
MrAleyado.
4944671 Sure! I am just G4 soooooo yeah I really need help.
4957137 just PM me the methods you'd like me to edit.
MrAleyado.