I have the best puppy-dog face ever. It will make you cry.
Tippy the male changeling was very excited. Today was the day he would begin his life as a teacher, a useful tool for the hive. And he wouldn't be just any teacher, he would teach those bugs how to morph!
Too bad those hatchlings could care less about morphing and care more about how Mr.Tippy got his powers.
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So far this is an amazing story. I know that this is said frequently, but keep up the good work!
I love this! And its strangely relevant to a story I'm writing... Are you a mind reader!?!?
Anyway side from the brevity of this chapter, I really like the names, and I thought that him having to reassure a girl in an awkward manor was funny. One thing I didn't like was Mr. Tippy breaking the fourth wall, while the information was both relevant and funny, it felt... Forced? out of character maybe? While I think the fact that almost the entire class phased out was a bit excessive, I would love to see what awkward situations happen between him and the nurse.
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I will happily keep this in mind next chapter, which will hopefully be uploaded today!
4779809 yay!
Nice, I was expecting a bit more drama with the nurse, maybe later chapters. I must say I kind of like that, through over site on the archetect's side, the hatchlings were on the opposite side of the hive as the nurses office.
This makes me LOL in my belly
Good show chap!
Interesting, but you should never need to state that the fourth wall is being broken. I think that's fourth-wall rule 10.b? Gotta get our guidebook...
Maybe you need a little, Chaotic Touch Of Harmony? ;p
Wait, they only to to school one day a week? What are they doing every other day?
Well it seems there are now only four thousand, two hundred and four changelings now. Could have put a stronger Changeling spin on the world's version of Williams, they would more likely have used phrases like, "he was a great infiltrator, who always kept his target's suspicions low with his funny wits and excellent acting skills. He was an inspiration to us all." but it's ok as is I guess.
Keep going! ;)
Will this be continued or is it dead?