This story is a sequel to Kingdom of Friendship
Twilight became a princess, the Elements of Harmony were returned to the Harmony Tree, and the Heartless have returned. Now it is up to her to take the Keyblade once more and see what she can do to save, not only Equestria, but a whole different world and bring peace to a third.
Overthrowing a tyrant, killing some heartless, and making new friends. Just another day for Twilight Sparkle.
I recommend reading the first story before this one, and I also think that reading my other story "Guard Bonding". Human tag is for eventual visit to a surprise world for Kingdom Hearts fans. DarkponyD is the one to thank if you like the world once it is visited. He helped me out a lot with that, without him, I might still be stuck there.
Okay, this Inkwell does remind me of one Pennington Inkwell. Coincidence or pupose? Also, I hope this wll be as grand as its prequel.
4789754 Coincidence. And I hope so too as far as its grandness. Thank you.
Wow, that was great! Can't wait to see Hollow Bastion!
4791853 Thanks for all the help.
4793278
No worries, I like being able to help!
Happy days! The sequel has come! Can't wait for the next chapter. Definitely one of my favorite stories. Though, if I may suggest, I'd suggest complicating things more. If there's something that Kingdom Hearts is known for, it's the complexity and confusion. From the beginning there wasn't a single enemy, always someone higher. Also, I'd suggest incapacitating the strongest weapons, create a steady goal that gets complicated throughout. But other than that I love this story.
4801188 Secret boss? Done it. Incapacitating the most powerful weapons? Just wait and see
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4801511 Great, but I'm not just saying a secret boss. But a secret boss, above a secret boss, above a secret boss, above a secret boss etc. Now I really can't wait, 'cause I know what I'd do to the most powerful weapons, and I can't wait to see what you'll do.
4801533 Chapter 11, the final chapter of this story will show how the weapons become useless.
4801583 Said it before, and I'll say it again. I can't wait. I wish you the best as you continue to write.
4801823 Well, my schedule has finally cleared up some for a week and a half. Perhaps I can get some writing in and there won't be any waiting between book two and book three. Thank you for your support.
4803682 Cool, can't wait. You're welcome.
At first, for whatever reason, I thought nobodies had made an appearance, but now, I'm not so sure. Anyway, another great chapter!
p.s. I read guard bonding.
4808928 They aren't nobodies, I considered it, but I haven't done it yet. Maybe in Part 3...
4808953 I figured that out when the keyblade couldn't kill them and that fact that nobodies aren't covered in cracks. Do I detect a spoiler?
4808963 No confirmation on whether or not nobodies will actually appear. As of this moment in time, I have not so much as mentioned them in the story. Also, I forgot to mention in the last reply, thank you for reading Guard Bonding, did it help with the characters at all?
4809000 Awww.... You're welcome, and yes it did. It helped me understand them.
4809007 This is far from their last appearance as well. They have pivotal roles up until the end of the story. Do you think that once I finish Kingdom of Friendship Part 3 I should write about their time as a squad or should I leave it as it is? I've been debating for a while now but I can't come to any definite conclusions.
4809013 Understandably, got that vengeance thing going for them. You should definitely write about their time as a squad.
4809025 I'll probably start as soon as I finish with the main story. I think that I will start it after their first mission together and take it out past when they have their falling out. To be honest out of the whole group, Twister is my favorite so she'll probably have some awesome moments.
4809030 Cool, can't wait. So then we'll get their perspective of the story. That's understandable.
4809038 I don't know if it will go all the way up to where they appear in this story, but I can promise that it will go up to, at the very least, the season 3 finale.
4809042 Okay, that makes sense. Ahh, Magical Mystery Cure. What fun.
4809053 One of my most watched episodes.
4809057 I find it funny, especially AJ's attempts at a dress and Pinkie with that pipe. My most watched is probably... Hmm... The season finale of season 4.
Should be alicorn.
Should be Raid
Apart from those, good chapter as always.
4843746 Okay. Thank you for pointing those out. Usually I try to look over the chapter for mess ups, but it seems I missed a couple
. The compliment was very appreciated, and I am glad to know that you are enjoying it. I was beginning to worry due to a sudden drop in views and no comments on that last chapter. I thought that I'd really screwed up somewhere.
Please tell me that Spike isn't a dog, it would be pretty hard to use a keyblade with paws.
4844261 No dogs make appearances during this story. However I did get a puppy while writing.
4844335 Thank the all mighty Keyblade.
4844464 I was fine with the movie and all, but that was something that kinda bugged me, so yeah, Spike is a human.
Woo! First review! *Clears throat* Now, on a related note, I think you should update on a schedule, not all at once, but not withholding until the end. If that makes any sense.
4859363 I update the story every Wednesday and every Saturday. My current problem is that I'm stuck on the 9th chapter of the 3rd story and that, along with school, makes it hard to write. I was thinking, since I divide each story into 3 sections, upload the first section using my current schedule for this story and hope that I finish it within the few weeks that will buy me.
4859531 I'm pretty sure that's what I was trying to say. But I can't be too terribly sure.
Oh and I know the reason why Spike was a dog, if you want to know.
4859639 I need to know! If I don't, I may die... but I probably won't.
4859725 Well, it's simple really, the writer decide that if a pony changed and do would a dragon, that the two being different species would change into equally different species. Though I don't think he should have been a dog.
4859799 Makes sense. I agree though, a dog is not the best choice.
4859879 Definitely, though, what else could they have made Spike?
4860435 No idea. That's why I haven't complained about it yet.
4860482 Lol, fair enough. Personally, I think it has something to do with his loyalty and other characteristics.
4860518 Sounds fairly logical. Regardless, for my story, he needs the hands that come with being a human. I was tempted to make him into something like Donald or Goofy, but I figured that being a human would be better for the story.
4860839 Agreed, though personally, I think that I, if I was in your position, would have left them in their normal forms, but that's just me. I would have rather enjoyed the interactions between Leon and an alicorn. But again that's just me, and I also happen to like the path your story is on.
4860847 KoF Part 2 more so serves as a connection between the first and the third stories. It establishes Haze and reveals his ultimate goal. I honestly considered keeping them in their Equestrian forms for this segment (I really got mixed up when having to write "Feet" instead of "Hooves" and caught myself screwing up while writing it multiple times
) but the main problem with that would be making Leon take her seriously. I may put out a short, alternate version of the segment where she and Spike are still a pony and a dragon at a later point though... that sounds like fun.
4860920 That's logical and respectable. I plan on doing something similar to my story, all of the interesting "what if's" anyway.
4860943 Yup
. I didn't even think about it until you brought it up, but honestly, I can see Yuffie trying to hug Twilight because ponies. (And yes, "Ponies" is a valid explanation for pretty much anything, at least in my college dorm.)
4860978 Really? That's the first thing I thought of when I read the prequel, well not necessarily with the group in Hollow Bastion. That makes perfect sense.
So, when is Spike going to help out in the fighting since he's a Keyblader too?
4861031 I wanted them to be humans for a short section, it just turned out to be a bit longer than I intended. In the third, there are no humans.
4861057 Soon... I'm pretty sure. I finished this story quite a while ago so my memory is a bit hazy on when Spike starts to fight, but I'm pretty sure that he has a fighting scene in this story that is good.
4861431 I never said it was a bad thing, and it is your story, you do what you want. That does generally happen sometimes, myself included. I don't know if I should be relieved, never been a fan of ponies give human, our vise versa, but this is an interesting twist indeed.