When Pinkie's youngest, Blinkie Pie, is sent to live with her fun loving older sister the ponies find that Blinkie is a little more then just off.
Just a silly little pony
When Pinkie's youngest, Blinkie Pie, is sent to live with her fun loving older sister the ponies find that Blinkie is a little more then just off.
Wow! Great first chapter! I'm looking forward to more!
4776981 God damn it Ben (Love you sweety)
4776994 thanks booty butt
did i break a rule in the comment guidelines or something or do you just not like criticism by someone nobody knows and has no stories posted
4777397 I'm really sorry I actually didn't mean to delete it. This is my first like two days on the site and when I hit the button that deleted it I thought it meant I wouldn't be viewing it anymore but it deleted the comment and I didn't know how to undo it. If you want to rewrite it I actually know not to hit that button this time and I can reply properly
"I always wished a had a little brother or sister to mess with growing up,” Rainbow Dash notes.
Uh, what about Scootaloo? Forget about her already?
4777456 Dash is so petty only biological matters
As I was saying, the spelling and grammar in this story could be better, you need an editor, or you could proofread. Also, I think you should make the conversations and details longer, and use the five senses. Thats basically what I wrote in a nutshell. oh and
thats the petriculture cycle series right there.
4777806 Oh okay, cool. I had my fiancé proof read it for me but he admitted he might have missed somethings so we're looking into finding someone else to lend a helping hand. And I'll try to add a little more description next chapter!
If that's the case, I shall call your version of her "Rainbow Douche."
4778191 Hahah I was just kidding, though that is very clever.
That was really good. I can't wait to read more!
4778724 aw thanks so much I'm glad you liked it!
Thank you, but I will still refer to her as such in the reviews. See ya next time!
This has the potential to be a great sad/dark-fic.
So Inkie is the one with the gray coat and black mane right? Plays a cello in canterlot. Hmmm. Site everyone call her Inkie it does she go by another name?
I MUST KNOW!!!
4784630 The most common name for the gray and black one is Inkie but I may be using a fandom theory character
4784170 Wow thank you so much! I really hope I can make it so
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I Know I was making a joke that Octavia was really a pie sister. Seeing as they are both gray and black and play the cello. I just thought It was mere coincidence
Oh haha. Yeah they do look weirdly alike that's probably where the theory came from in the first place.
If you need help editing/ proof reading, I'll be willing to help you.
I was glad to see this finally updated, even though it was a rather short chapter.
4798529 Thanks! And I'll try make the next one longer.
4798407 Oh really? I would really appreciate it.