An acient evil returns to Equestria that threatens every living thing. It is up to all those who live in the land to defend against the upcoming threat. All hope lies on a single human to rally the inhabitants of the land to work together to defeat their common enemy. With the threat appearing any day will the hero and his freinds be able to gather enough allies?
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Thought it was a Shadow Over Innsmouth crossover, was still good though.
450269 I know I caught that right after I thought of the title. I just couldnt find any title that would fit.
The line :
(“Wow” Spirit said still not believing all that had just occurred moments ago. “Is it too late to go back to the desert?” he
grinned
“I’m afraid not” Celestia said "You already took the element of Hope" )
Shouldn't Celestia say "I'm afraid so"
Good story though keep it up
470292 Good catch...probably should stop trying to review my stuff at work.
Well done
Francis?So that must be Spirit's real name.
Epicness with a hint of D'aww at the end.
874683 Thanks glad you liked it :)
739966 I was going to comment when you did but Spirit does have a "real" name I wasnt sure if I wanted to add it or not. If I use him again I have a plan for it.
Cute i liked it. Are you going to make another one?
2228246 I've been working on two stories a sequel to this one and a different story line. Sadly I've been busy and haven't felt like working on either.
I'm surprised they never looked more closely at his tags, wouldve told them a fair bit
It's always the quiet ones...you have to watch out for them...they always seem to beat you in the end.