• Member Since 26th Mar, 2012
  • offline last seen February 28th

Whiskers


new to being a brony, but lovin it and im sure i wont stop cuz its SOOOOO AWESOME!

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*dies*

TLC

:rainbowhuh:...Sure, I buy it. :moustache:

Well... It wasn't terrible! I actually kinda enjoyed it, only for the fact that it's AppleDash. :ajbemused::rainbowwild: :trixieshiftleft:

That being said, I feel like giving you advice.
Rule 1. Describe how the ponies feel more often, it gives the reader a better feel for the story and adds depth.
Rule 2. If using ponies from the show, keep their personality intact, simply add on to it.
Rule 3. THE MOST IMPORTANT RULE!!!! Don't ever post a story without getting some feedback first. It's such a valuable thing, and I'm absolutely positive this would be a gem if you had. And if you did... Well, try running it past a bunch of people.

And there you go. Never stop writing, and enjoy it.

That was extremely unsatisfying. :ajbemused:

Thanks Bronyism ^^ your the only one to give a real answer/comment/thingy so far >.> but i wasn't really trying on this one, there was a few references i put in that quite a few ponies wouldn't get and i just wasn't in the mood to care when i posted this xD but thanks :) this will probably be my last goof off do-watever-the-hell-i-want type fic xD at least on here :p

Well...I liked it :twilightsmile:
Maybe I should see someone about my mental stability? :rainbowderp::rainbowderp: :rainbowlaugh:

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