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Kasper Makarov led a sad lonely life. He lived at an ice lab in Antarctica by himself studying boring old ice.
Nothing ever changed, just cold,isolation,and white. He retreated to the icy wasteland of cold and loneliness to escape the pressures of society. He came to like and welcome the cold,silence,and loneliness.The only thing that warmed his heart was My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. During one summer, when the sun refuses to set,Kasper's ice lab was hit by a harsh blizzard. His heat radiators were frozen and he had to go out into the storm to thaw them. Before he reached the outdoor radiator room, he fell and was frozen over by the ice and snow. The last thing he remembered before he woke-up was the smile on the faces' of the mane six.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 23 )

moar you shall get:moustache:

This is an excellent story but only if it continues

>>Boolyboo Continues it will:moustache:

Interesting, could use some editing with punctuation and spacing, but interesting. I will be watching this.

Only piece of criticism I could give is that even during the monologues, try to space them out a bit.
It gets kind of discomforting reading just a wall of text rather than two or three separate paragraphs.
Also, did not see any grammar mistakes, so great job!
Please continue! :twilightsmile: I can not wait for more!
However, if you do continue please try and take time in your work. I have seen a few fics go downhill
pretty quickly when authors try to crank out short uninteresting chapters daily
But all in all Great Job :pinkiehappy:

>>Platinum2094Note taken:moustache:

:rainbowhuh:
Kasper...You...Are...An...Idiot. For living in the Artic for many years and you would think to bring your gear with you out in a blizzard that is dangerous is common knowledge 101, so...yea, IDIOT

>>Boolyboo lol I guess he felt so epic with the amour and sword he thought would not get hurt :rainbowlaugh::moustache:

:rainbowhuh: Will he get powers through out the next chapter like frost or ice considering that he lived in arctic most of his life that he should get some sort of cold magic? ¿No?

>>boolyboo yah his powers are involving ice but it also is something about the bigger picture [ hint:second book about sand] spoiler!!!!!:pinkiehappy::trollestia::moustache:

no actually i think he becomes Dr. freezer you know form batman kinda thing:pinkiecrazy:

kararnos>>lol yeah maybe :moustache:

i carry the mighty sword of FIRST!:pinkiehappy:

I asked this before but I have to ask again: :rainbowhuh:
Will he get Frost powers or something by those lines. Why specifically forst, well he did live in the Artic his whole life so frost would make the most sense of power he would acquire.

LIKE A BOSS.

Finaly FROST powers, im so happy

Boolyboo>>yay*:flutterrage:

One thing. Why would this place need radiators? Radiators are only useful for radiating heat, that's why they're called radiators. I would gladly destroy my radiator if I was in his position. 'Cuz you can't radiate cold unless the outside is warmer than the inside, and you can't radiate heat when the outside is hotter. The temperature transfer always tries to equalize temperature everywhere, and radiators only accelerate the process. That's why radiators are useful for engines, and other devices that produce heat but require the heat to stay below certain levels. Sorry, getting a nerdy, there. I really shouldn't be poking at something that most people would overlook. But other than that, so far, I like it.

Bro.Help me man.Im suffering from story withdrawal -shows jittery hand- YOU GOTTA HELP ME MAN!!!

Holy jeebus!! Help that man

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