"Woah. This place is way bigger than The Candy Kingdom" Finn said looking around.
"Hey, Jake!" Finn said.
"Yeah?" Jake said while stretching over to Finn.
"You thinking what i'm thinking?" Finn said pointing to the Royal Ball Room.
"Oohhhhh, yeeaaahhhh" Jake said.
Finn and Jake ran to the Ball Room.
"Dude, even this Ball Room is bigger!" Finn said trotting forward looking around.
"Off!" Finn fell down.
He looked up to see a White Stallion with Blonde Hair.
"I'm sor-" Finn started to say.
"WATCH WHERE YOU'RE GOING, PEASANT!!" He yelled at Finn.
"Hey! I was just trying to apologize to you! What's your name?" Finn said getting up.
"If you must know, Peasant. My name is Prince Blueblood" He said scoffing.
"Hey, Jake?" Finn said.
"Yeah?" Jake said.
Finn whispered in his ear.
They both stared at Blueblood.
"What?" He said.
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"HEY! GET ME DOWN FROM HERE RIGHT NOW!" Blueblood yelled.
"I dunno. You look fine being up on top of the Castle hanging upside-down" Finn snickered.
"Whatever, I can teleport dow- HEY! WHY CAN'T I USE MY MAGIC!?!" He yelled.
"Yeah, I imagine that must be hard with Horn-Brace on your horn" Finn said.
"WHY YOU LITTL-" He started to say before Jake put Duck-Tape over his mouth.
"He'll have a hard time explaining that in the morning" Finn guffawed.
"Heeheehee" Jake giggled.
"Finn?" Somepony said.
"Huh? Oh. Hey, Twilight" Finn said turning around to face her.
"I'd like to meet my brother, Shining Armor, and his wife and my sister, Princess Cadence" She said gesturing her hoof towards the two. "Nice to meet you two" Finn said bowing towards them.
"Nice to meet you too, Finn the human" Shining said bowing back.
They left a little while after to dance.
"Well, see you later, Twilight" Finn said waving goodbye.
"Wait, Finn" Twilight said stopping him.
"Yeah, what is it?" Finn said turning around.
"Would you, um, care to dance?" She said shyly.
Finn blushed at hearing this.
"S-s-sure, Twilight" He said holding her hoof.
They trotted onto the dance floor.
"-sighs- He's growing up so fast. -sniffs-" Jake said crying a little.
"Do you know how to dance?" Twilight asked Finn.
"Yeah!" Finn said excitedly.
"As a pony?" She said.
"Oh. No" Finn said.
"Well. I'll teach you then. First you have to..."
Later...
-slow music playing-
"I gotta say. This is really fun!" Finn said happily.
"Hey, Finn?" Twilight said shyly.
"Yeah?" He said.
"Could you, um, close your eyes?" She said even more shyly.
"Uhhh... okay" He said closing his eyes.
'Now's my chance!' Twilight thought inching closer to Finn's face
Closer, and closer, and closer...
-Crash- "Heeheeheee!"
"What the-?!" Finn said turning towards the sound.
A chilly blast came forth from the outside.
"No.. It can't be..." Finn said.
"What? It can't be who?" Twilight said.
"Heeheehee!" The Ice King appeared from the freezing blast.
He looked around and saw Finn and Twilight.
"Princess..." He said before completely freezing Twilight.
"Twilight!" Finn yelled.
"What's going on in here!?!" Princess Celestia and Luna appeared at the entrance.
But before they could do anything, the Ice King froze them both.
The Ice King swooped down and grabbed all of them.
"Ice King! Why are you doing this!?!" Finn yelled stomping his hoof on the floor.
"I'm afraid I can't tell you! But you can come and try to save them!" He said before flying away.
Finn stood there wide-eyed.
"Hey, man! What's going on..." Jake said before looking around.
"Oh" He said.
END OF CHAPTER FOUR
4770722 Vhapter Four's here!
4770634 Chapter Four's done!
4770020 Maybe it's because he's frikin' handsome!
This is coming along alright except for the ocasional lowercase I, I'm, ect.
Love the crossover so far keep it up!
4771475 Fineeee......
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This story is UNACCEPTABLE!!
4775093 Just for saying that. You're not going to be in the story, douche.
4775093 4775136 Ouch. There goes the candy-people making formula. I'm putting this on my read-later list, and I'll read it once I've finished with the other stories I'm reading. Good luck on your first story!
in my opinion the chapters are too short, and the story goes too fast, but other than that, good story, keep the good work.
4775636 Thanks. I don't know why i'm saying this, but, if you or someone else asks me to put something in (Reference, sentence, pun, or Etc.) I'll probablly put them in.
4776285 Make a referenception! You reference your reference to your story!
4776287 I already put one on the current chapter I'm working on.
4776399 Hmmm... Then make a reference to that. >;D ALL TEH CEPTION
how did ice king get there in the first place??