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Vanilla Melody


Writing isn't really my thing . . . But cute stuff is! Also, I can do a killer Apple Bloom impression! :D

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Tank had always considered her his best friend, but can he face the harsh reality?

Part of the story was inspired by part of this video:
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=yfTV3UV_WlY

Originally written for the EQD Outside Insight Summer Fanfic Contest, but then . . . turned into something else.

Cover Art: http://brainchildeats.deviantart.com/art/Tank-280028383

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 5 )

This is really cute! I really like how you wrote it in the first person, so we could have more of an insight on Tank's personality. Also, by merging it with the episode, you made it more realistic (well, as realistic as a cartoon about magical flying horses can get), therefore making me characterise Tank to not be unlike he was in this.
9/10, only because I realised this:

(by the way, she can talk to us animals! [cool, right?])

Aren't ponies animals?

4781158 Haha, I knew that. :twilightblush: Off to fix it then! Thank you for your kind words. :twilightsmile:

GREAT first draft! It's not often we get to read Tank's side of the stories.

Better than hearing Gummy's deep existentialistic commentary.

Keep up the good work. BIG thumb's up!

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