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DarkJester


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Before reading:
I think I know what is going to happen.

Complete but Chapter 1?

HOW!?!

I think it's more of a question of what Rainbow Dash wouldn't do for a pint of cider...
>Pic related

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YOU ARE A HORRIBLE FUCKING PERSON, FUCKING DUCKWAD!!!! (sorry, I was listening to "rage quit" when I posted that.)

Fuck yes.

That is all.

Applejack thinking that Rainbow Dash wet the bed was hilarious in a sick twisted way. :pinkiecrazy: :rainbowlaugh:

At first I was going yo hate this, but I enjoyed it instead:rainbowkiss:

iM NOT READIN!.

Thats what I said. But im going to now. :rainbowkiss:

Just read.
Im sorry. But... the story in some words was like this

Flim and Flam : YOU... ARE GOIN T LOVE ME :flutterrage:

Nuff said :P

447750 I happen to highly approve of your name. I couldn't agree more.

I personally think, and I'm not kidding, you should write a sequel involving Rainbow struggling with her potential pregnancy (because they didn't use protection), and her cider addiction.

Nice story! :twilightsmile:

I gotta say this is remarkably well written, I surprised it has as many thumbs down as it does.

So the bros 'POUR' Dashie some 'CIDER' from their 'FAUCETS'?
CHALLENGE CONSIDERED

Something aint right with that pony.:ajbemused:

I thoroughly enjoyed that what an excellent read before bed

Oh DarkJester, you have yet to disappoint.

Were the fastest, most fun, cummiest, Flim Flam brooooothers,

*censored*:rainbowwild:*censored* :pinkiegasp::facehoof::ajsleepy::fluttershbad::raritydespair: :trollestia:~:heart:

What I imagine the reactions would be of the others seeing this going on.

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Sorry. I saw this pic somewhere else and randomly thought I should post it here.
Creepy, right?

In the middle of clopping, I said to myself,

"That must be some damn good cider."

3A

Is it flim or flam that's the father?

What the buck...

...have I just read...

I'm dead.

(Read this shortly after your newest one finally, even if already kind of read it before and faved it, but wasn't sure, etc. But fell asleep and then didn't review until now.)

Well, this one was another surprising one, and totally in-character with what Rainbow Dash would've done I think, had things transpired differently after the Super Speedy Cider Squeezy 6000 episode (from what I gathered). And yeah, like others I can't help but think: Rainbow + over a dozen times worth of sex in her = likely pregnancy. But even if this is just a one-shot, was still good, even if not as well among my favorites of your work of MLP fanfiction that I've read. Just cause Rainbow didn't seem to enjoy it at times and seems like they forced it upon her somewhat, cause of what happened in Ponyville. Just in my opinion, but I did like it.

One kinda major error (there's a few others, but since this is months old, doubt would care and didn't write any others down):
Flam and Flam merely shrugged before taking a seat together on one of the nearby haypiles. <---------- Said Flam twice here. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Rainbow_Dash_lolface.png

Not sure if I should read...put it off till later...

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