After being disavowed of the mailing service, Derpy instead took the life of a reporter and went to the Island of Shining Shores, for investigating some alleged poaching of animals in that area, however , instead of getting the great report of her life, something terrible happened at the Island that might end up in tragedy.
Err... good! It's sort of ok but yet I don't know. Overall, I will give it a tums up
Wow. Just... Wow.
And...
FIRST!!!
Hiya, there. I hope you're doing quite well. ^_^x
Loved the story, especially with what you did the pacing. You made it look both intense, and captured it in just a few words. And I loved it. This is the Second Fic by you that I'm reading, and I really like it, so keep trying hard, and best of luck with you. Here! Have a few mustaches!
Bye, and take care.