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Just your average writer.

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When Pinkamena was a filly, a Sonic Rainboom knocked her in a deep coma; one that doctors came to believe she would never emerge from.

To her, though, the event made her believe that her purpose in life was to spread joy. She no longer lived the dull, boring existence of the rock farm. She was the happiest pony in Equestria where everypony was her friend.

But now as she miraculously wakes up from this trance, she is hit with the cold reality.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 25 )

Looks like a good start.

poor poor pinkie.... the hole idea is great keep it up this has something

can i make a cover art?

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Well I don't see why not. Show it to me when you're finished.

For the record, here from the 'I just want a comment' thread.

And I rather like this so far. Not much more than that to say right now, but I hope to see this continued.

I'm especially curious about those little 'gasp!' moments from the doctor.

I'm guessing Pinkie Pinkamena will be getting moved to the psychiatric ward soon :pinkiecrazy:

"Maybe I should talk to her like the nurse. She's seem nice."

*"Maybe I should talk to her like the nurse. She seems nice."

Things are getting interesting

Well, this is a really nice story. A bit slow paced, but I could get that you're building up emotions here. And lemme tell you, you're doing a good job at that. I await your next update, and I pray that the series has a happy end.

Aww. I want to hug Pinkamena. Great job btw.

:pinkiesad2:

Almost a bit TOO fitting an emote for this story so far, but still...

Oh Celestia, these feels. That would be absolutely frighten to be in her position. Great story btw, I can't wait to read the rest.

This story is interesting and well written. You did a great job on putting emotions into it. I love it. :twilightsmile:

I love this story and am hooked on it. I think it's well written and deserves way more attention. :heart:

This story is lacking in world building information for it’s readers, unless you’re planning something to happen...

So far you haven’t described if anything Pinkie thinks is real is real or not, I mean if Dr. Goodtalk had recognised names like Princess Celestia or Luna that should have been noted and if she didn’t then it means your whole story’s world is completely different from the show but at this point I can’t tell if it’s supposed to be different.

Anyway it’s still an interesting story and I want to see where you’re going to take it.

I love this story! I read something a while ago like this, but I think I might like this one more:pinkiegasp:! Pinkie is so cute when she's sad:pinkiesad2:! I can just imagine all of this happening, good job! Now to read the next chapter!!:pinkiehappy:

I love this! This is longer and almost definitely better than other stories I read like this! keep up the good work!!!:pinkiehappy:

I :heart: Pinkie Pie!!!! She's so kawaii when she's sad!!!

Hold a tick!
.....Fluttershy?
Was alive?
And is now dead?



Pinkie was in the spirit world.

6244338 They all saw the sonic rainboom... it probably killed them all. Modern medicine saved Pinkie, but she should have been dead. They dragged her out of the afterlife.

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Yeah, or maybe the dream was sorta a "what could have been" dream. Or maybe this is the dream!
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Dude that sucks, to have everything that brought joy and happiness in life stripped away from waking up from a coma. I feel sorry for pinkie

Definitely tracking this!

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