Cosplayer buys a replica staff to the one merasmus uses and gets sent to equestria as the ghostley wizard. He attempts to help but gets imprisoned within his own book for a thousand years. Starts in season 1 episode 2.
'Oh, it's you. it's been a looooooong time. you know, since you Murdered me' oh look, cake...
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The spelling.... Good gracious... Its horrible
When tah dah happened I immedeitly thought of vanossgaming
Aside from spelling, not too bad.
4749482 and Peter griffon
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thanks!
WHY?! Why do authors use the thousand years and trapped in something cliche?!
*(sobs uncontrollably)*
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because it allows being able to skip the awkwardness of waking up somewhere and having no clue of where they are.
well that why I done it anyway.
4750084 there are mistakes I can see suspect is 1 of them but I'm not gonna go grammar nazi great story I expect more
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thank you for pointing ou that there are mistakes, I will try too reduce them as time rolls on.
I think I will release the next chapter tommorow.
oh any ideas as to what he should send as an object to summon him by? I was thinking a bomb but I wont need any Ideas just yet unless you have any. He wont need one until 4th chapter.
4750130 a skull? And your welcome
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hmmm. I like the Idea! THANKS!
4750181 he wears 1 so I thought it would suit him
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I, didnt think about that...
a goat skull it shall be then.
thank you again! Death2205!
4750240 can I ask for a tf2 class of mine to appear?
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at a later hime. Yes. Tell me. What class is it?
4750290 there
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SOLDIER! YOU WERE THE WORST ROOMMATE!
If you ever need a proof reader, let me know.
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I believe I do...
with my spelling...
Is this Garrys Mod?
I'll give you some personal mail for the corrections I find.
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I dont think so...
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ok
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noon? Why noon?
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dun. Dun. Duuuuh!
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Merasmus arrives on a tide of blood. He also heals with healing magic and asprin
4751130 way too funny
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It reminded me of prop hunt...
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Might happen at some point...
hah! Twilight would be a book, pinkie a balloon, rainbow um I dont know, rarity a gem, spike a gem also, fluttershy a animal, applejack an apple.
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That would be fun to do!
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if I dont make a chapter about that some one should make a story about it.
4750898 my soldier + Twilights liberry = ?
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= explosion, fires, angry twilight and an unsummoning
Is merasmus portrayed as a jerk or along with the flow kind
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not a jerk, but doesnt allways go along with the flow.
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not a jerk, but doesnt allways go along with the flow.
nah he just seems to do his own thing and tease the future to annoy celestia but seems to forget to leave some mystery until the end at times to aggravate her further.
he should have told her for 6 moons and 3 days the cake will be a lie that would have done something ... poor Luna likely be blamed but still either she'll freak out at Luna for possible trying to steal her cake in the future and make it self fulling or bother twilight and or herself trying to figure it out.
( telling your enemies lies for fun, that or getting discord to help you when he's reformed so that it comes true ... also no evil smug grin emoticon.... )
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shhhhh! Cake lies and stealthy robbery of cake come soon. And closely followed by paranoid, angry and terrified celestia.
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God........
Fuck it all help us
There's 2 cake theif part 1's!?
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not any more. 1st one deleted itself when I published it but clearly that turned out not to be the case.
sorry about that
Dear god, the grammar and spelling, IT BURNS US!!!
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l sigh...
the only problem any one finds it seems.
so beautiful.
5188258 I have but one thing to say about your comment.
that avatar counteracts rarity greatly in you comment.
5189247 aaahhhhhhh hahaha dont stop!!!
Wouldja lookathat wall-o-text.
Not trying to be mean, could you try using line breaks? To more easily differentiate paragraphs and such?
OMAHGERD
The wall-o-text is strong with this one.
Or maybe its just one huge paragraph?
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...
May I please have your password, so I can fix your wall-o-text chapters?
...Thief, not theif.
*gives you a hug, and wishes you well*