Applejack's creepy cousin arrives into town hoping to start a new life much to Applejack's dismay. Thinking she'll only hurt people like she did in the past, Applejack runs her off into the Everfree Forest only to be found by Apple Bloom who warms her heart.
New paragraph each time someone talks!
Other than that, Whoopiddy Doo Doo De Floo!
Really, This has a LOT of potential.
Happy Writing!
~Viv
Dear god
Wall
Of
Text
MADNESS
Yea, can't read it
I have better time understanding Silent Hill's SIREN then this shit
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No kidding - it's like this Great Wall of Chinese Text Fail. It could be the best story ever and you can't get past the eyebleed.
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*Snap* *Snap*
*Snap* *Snap*
You tell em sister
Underrated.
Not great, but still deserving of something more than 4 thumbs down.