I wonder what would happen if I press that 'Report User' button over there. (http://qostine.deviantart.com is avatar source)
Venture into the wonderful land of a cat who hates Rarity, and most other things. Mostly Rarity.
The 1st chapter is meant as a standalone for Equestria Daily's Outside Insight Summer Fanfic Contest, though depending of the reception, I might continue the story (as if I'd get reception). Enjoy! But I'm terrible, so you probably won't.
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Cool story! You've captured Opal's character quite well.
There are a few extra spaces you should remove (the two I saw were "and still not find a single thing to do" and "the pet of a certain Mr. Luck ,"), but otherwise the writing looks solid.
I vote in favor of continuation!
4854883 Fixed! Thanks for the support!
And another thing what's that funny purple lizard thing always hanging around, It should be going to the vet, To get fixed!, I can't tell who in heat more, Her or it!?"
Nice perspective ,
Sad thing is I'm of the opinion that most cats think like this.
Well done.
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Should I pretend that you tried to make sense?
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Fortunately, I have a very affectionate cat who isn't motivated much from food, so I know he loves me for my personality.Or something.
Okay. It's a little all over the place, and I had a really hard time following Opal's train of thought, but it's pretty entertaining.