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Lapis-Lazuli and Stitch
Profile of Retired Writer, Lapis-Lazuli, and his editor, Stitch / Inky. Thanks for the memories, FiMFiction.
Lapis-Lazuli and Stitch
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So, um . . . that was certainly something. I'm not quite sure what to say. I mean, it seems more like it's dark for the sake thereof, and if the author's note is anything to go by, that's the point.
However, I can't really get behind this because . . . there's no substance beyond that. It's dark, terrifying even. But it doesn't make me think about anything besides, "Wow, that was creepy."
I guess this kind of stuff ain't for me. Here's a like for the troubles.
Sounded like it was being told by an alien creature. Which I think is what you were going for. It made some sense, but still I'm left wondering...
What the hell did I just read?
Minus my confusion I thought it was pretty creepy, and well written.
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Blah blah minor spelling mistakes here and there blah blah.
Good story! A very chilling read which spoke volumes about the things around us and of how the things we think we heard may have been true or something. I have no clue.
As the Timelord dude said though, the story had no real substance beyond its own existence, as if what happened to this pony had little to no effect on anything that happened around him.
At first I was like a dark take on the Velveteen Rabbit?
Or something akin to Plucker.
Still not to shabby.
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I liked it.
It had a vague Lovecraftian feel to it.
Only wish there was more.
Sorry seems badly wrote and hard to understand,and I'm normally a fan of story's like this but this was confusing and not the good type. Downvote for you sorry.
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Hey, I get that. I'll admit I wrote it in a convoluted way purposefully, and I understand that's not everyone's style. At least you had the decency to comment on why you gave it a downvote.
This is almost identical to my nightmare last night.
So creepy
A sequel would be amazing.
I am wondering where the extra limbs came from?
I understand everything else but that.
I loved this. It has a very lovecraftian feel, which is always good. I love a good psychologically built horror, thoughts of insanity bursting through my mind as the world slowly chuckles to the tempo of a fate worse than death. Glorious!
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
Be careful what you wish for, because it might just come true.
You can has review!