Applejack comes across an unfamiliar apple tree just beyond the borders of Sweet Apple acres. One bite from its plentiful and succulent fruit....and she's never the same again.
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*perks in interest* Did I hear "lycan"?
The short description is lacking the a in 'Applejack.' Just a heads-up.
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Thanks to the cover image, I read it as "AAAH!pplejack". The ensuing giggle fit nearly threw me out of my chair.
I suppose I should actually read this now, shouldn't I? Well, that's one way to attract an audience!
What if the apples were the result of a fungus and an algae cross breeding with a tree?
Then it would be likened to a lichen of a lycan
I am so sorry
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4739956 XD LOL Oh, my.....It's been fixed. Derp moment there. Thanks^^
4740298 !!! NICE ONE! Lol That's an interesting perspective. ^^
Awesome. Just... awesome. Though I wish there were more. But it's nice.
4741298 Actually, I've gotten a few others wanting a follow-up as well. If you wish for one as well, then I'll see about making one (This one was done on a whim X3)
I appreciate your feedback, friend. Thank you for the time ^^
I think I'll need more than one scene to judge this. To be honest, I'd consider what we've seen little more than a prologue, or even just a portion of a prologue. I'm not saying that you should write more if you feel that the story doesn't require it; don't force it if it's not going to come.
Maybe I'm biased, though. I believe that there's a story to be told with transformation, but I've never been able to accept the idea that that story is merely a shifting of shape. To me a transformation is a journey, a story of the change of body and mind, a change of routine, of perspective. There should be some emotional investment. Either the character must learn, or the reader must feel. As of right now, neither of those has been satisfied for me.
The scene was pretty cool... but cool as never been enough for me. It was written pretty well, though, so I won't be giving this a dislike or anything like that. Thanks for the story and the giggle fit earlier. Good luck in the future, hon!
4742019 LMAO Damn, I wish I was that witty and resourceful as to include the "AHH!" (got a good laugh as well when I saw my error XD)
Wow! I think this is the most in-depth feedback I've received! Ever! To that I'm grateful for you taking the time to write a comment! as mentioned before, I wrote this on a whim. I usually try to stay away from anything that has been done as often as high-end escort, but I thought "What the hell?" and came up with this little number.
Thinking nothing of it, I just finished up, logged out and slept for a good 3 hours. Then I check my email and see that it got quite a bit of attention! Even though I wasn't really expecting much, I'm glad you and others got a good chuckle at it (I cracked up at Mothey's comment, then again when I saw their profile X3 Veery Nice to look at btw, Mothey! :3)
Now I'm actually trying to come up with a follow-up, seeing as how 1.) I've become a tad-bit inspired by this new developement and 2.) other Bronies/Pegusisters seem to like it. ;^^
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If you do decide to continue it, let me know and I'll read the rest.
I think You sould make more, like somepony need to save her... Right?
4755483 I assure you, I'm in the process of getting the follow-up story started, so it's in the making :3 I Thank you for your feedback ^^
I pop up in here again to tell you; GET ON WITH A SEQUAL!
4831316 X3 I is trying! I is trying!
4831381 I would LOVE to help, iffen you be needing some....hint hint cough.
Sorry, but I had to put this here. SEQUAL SEQUAL.