Fluttershy has always been a pushover as long as any pony can remember. Always been pushed around, sat on, accidentally eaten, basically everything you can think of under Celestia's sun. Today is no exception for her either
As always critiques are welcome. The more I get the better I can learn to improve myself and make my stories more enjoyable.
Authors Note: Eh not very proud of this story at all. But i'll keep it up for the criticisms and all. Also to help me learn from my mistakes and get better as well.
Chapters (1)
I applaud you for your intentions for making a funny fic... but stuff like this is something I just can't tolerate.
Could do with a few more chapters.
I feel this was taken a little bit too far. I, and some other people, don't appreciate abuse as comedy.
Why would eny body do that to sweat little fluttershy?
It's just so sad.
Huh. Most interesting.