I'm Shining Armor.
Years ago I made a mistake.
The royal wedding of Cadence and I...
Little did I realize my "wife..."
Turned out to be the Queen of the changelings.
I didn't realize until after we had our first kid that he was not normal...
He was a changeling.
And now, I'm stuck in a position I can't get out of...
Back at the Canterlot wedding of Cadence and Shining Armor---the real Cadence and Twilight didn't make it to save her brother. The kiss was planted and the marriage was done. Slowly over the years the life was sucked out of Shining Armor and the love was always drained out of him, but he didn't care. As long as he had his loving wife Cadence right? That is... until after their first child he realizes his 'Cadence...' is actually the queen of the changelings.
4725533 that's because the Shining Armor "having a kid with a Chrysalis" is not the conflict, the minor paragraphs were just telling the past, while the story is ABOUT the aftermath and about his son.
4725576
There's a typo in the title.
Unlike other people I liked it, and want more. Wait, GODDAMMIT NOT ANOTHER BLOODY FAVORITE!!
4725576
Thank you for fixing the typo.
4725600 Thank you. Sorry if I came down a bit hard. I'll thumb up your story now since it was an honest mistake.
4725665
I had the exact same sentiments; looks like she made an honest mistake. Glad to see I'm not the only one willing to forgive and forget.
4725665 thank you
4725668 thanx
I'm not sure how familiar you are with FIMFiction's reader base, but they don't take kindly to deleted comments, regardless of what the content was within them. If you don't like a comment, give it a thumbs down, but if you delete it, you're going to get a whole boatload of hate from all over the place.
It's too late to undo this now, but... well, in the future, I'd suggest never deleting comments unless the mods request you do (I've deleted my own comments due to arguments in a story that were personal and not focused on story elements, at the request of the mods). I would rather your story get the exposure it deserves, not attract a bunch of people getting unnecessarily angry over a few comments that didn't matter anyway.
Oh gawd, that cover art is killing me! Hahaha!
4725686 Ok, thanx for the advice. I'll remember that in the future, but I am kinda new to fimfiction and I'm not completely familiar with it.
Tad bit fast paced. Did you rush this one?
Oh the DRAMA!
Oh wait, it has a legitimate Shining and Chrysalis pair.
Sweet!
4730611 no, I didn't mean to, but I'm rlly trying to work on that
4732184 Thanx for telling me, I'll over look the story and look for things like that and edit them.
4732112 I understand. Writing is really hard and you've got a good story here. So I clap my hands for the story so far. *clap**clap**clap*
Once again, pacing. But I can't complain too much. The story is good and I'm not good with pacing myself.
And then they f*****.
The end.
And then Zany gathered a resistance force. The coup was successful. Chrysalis is dethroned. Shining Armor as sole king. Shining Armor goes power crazy and keeps raping Chrysalis. Equestria is back to normal-ish.
4741889 XD
So, rushed... must. point. out. grammatical problem:
Did you get the idea of this from "daughter of discord"
Totally super-duper fast with drama, mushy and lovey-dovey ending.
So fast.
4762111 yes, I did get some ideas from daughter of discord, such as the pony x changeling. But DisneyFanatic(writer of daughter of discord) is an excellent writer, and I am inspired by her work
wow that ending was so rushed it put super sonic to shame.
Wait is dinky's eyes like derpy?
Where did Tia and luna come from?! after more than 16 years of standing at the sidelines they could at least helped them!
Reading this is like hitting my head with a hammer.
Looking forward to reading the next chapters :3c