• Member Since 11th Oct, 2013
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ManeShadow


I write stories, I crack jokes, and I watch My Little Pony.

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This story is an entry to the Equestria Daily Outside Insight Summer Fanfiction Contest!.
The story prompt is as follows:
"Write a story about ponies... from a non-pony's point of view."

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A lone Windgo searching for food comes across a conflict between a mother and son. What seems like easy food quickly turns into something much more unexpected.

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A special thanks to the amazing proofreader PropdowPony for being so helpful in improving the story and putting up with my stupid mistakes and questions. He's a fantastic dude!
I hope you all enjoy and I wish everyone else in the contest good luck!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 10 )

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D'AAAAWWWWW.

IT'S SO FLUFFY I'M GONNA DIE!!!

I enjoyed this a lot. Are you going to be writing another chapter?

Okay, now that was a good read.

Thanks for writing! :pinkiesmile:

4835270 Thanks for reading it! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :pinkiehappy:


4835216 I wrote this as a one-shot for a writing contest, so I don't think so, but that could always change!


4835210 Thanks for checking it out! :twilightsmile:

Sheesh, don't know if I should feel sorry for the 'guy' or not. There is one typo; one of the words 'we' should be 'me,' but it didn't take away from the enjoyment of reading it. I give it a 9.5 out of 10! Keep up the fine work and good luck! :pinkiehappy:
P.S. Loved the 'hunch' bit. I'm a sucker for running jokes. :twilightblush:

4849926 Wow, thanks! :pinkiehappy: I'm really glad that you enjoyed it, and thanks for the favorite! :heart:

Wow. That is one shitty parent.

4889238 Don't let her hear you say that. I've heard she gets a bit irritable after long nights.
(Also, thanks for reading. Hope you somewhat enjoyed it!)

Congratulations on your feature in EQD! You've worked hard on this story, and I hope you'll continue to write more like it. :pinkiehappy:

if you think about it the windigos and the changelings are kind of the same do you agree?

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