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Ruby Pinch and Dinky Hooves' long time rivalry has gotten in the way of progress! Luckily, their magic teacher, Twilight Sparkle, has come up with an idea of reviving the two bitter rivals' friendship. And what could revive a friendship like a special magic exam? Nothing. Nothing at all!

Will Twilight's plan succeed? Or will her plan end up adding flames to an already heated rivalry? Only one way to find out!

Quick Note: All characters are meant to be a few years older due to this story taking place a few years after the events of FiM.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 5 )

Decent, *Fanboy in 3, 2, 1* OMG, yes! A Ruby/Dinky friendship fic! I have waiting for this forever! (About two months). Thanks homie, keep it up.

Not a bad first effort at all, truth be told.
Lots of exposition and grammatical gripes though, and your paragraph formatting could use some work. That said, the characters are cute when they're angry. And it's great to see Twilight taking charge over the two little troublemakers.

I'm intrigued

I don't think I've ever seen something like this before. Interesting.

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