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Gulheru


A Pole by birth, a Lawgiver by trade and a Trickster by choice. Altogether a most friendly, sociopathic madman. At your service...

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This story is a sequel to Rendezvous with a Batpony


Princess Twilight Sparkle is keen on bringing the Magic of Friendship to everyone, not only the ponies of Equestria. Accepting an invitation she received a long time ago, she decides to visit the domain of batponies. Alongside Midnight Wind, a Nightguard member she befriended, she sets off on a perilous journey to the land of Noctraliya.

But can she fulfill her task when faced with internal rivalries, political intrigues, cultural aversions... and a funny feeling growing gradually in her heart?


Noctraliyar Language Guide and Dictionary

Chapters (41)
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Comments ( 1108 )

Awesome, I've been waiting for this :pinkiehappy:

Looks like there will be a lot of intrigue.

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What makes you say that? :raritywink:

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Thank you kindly. :twilightsmile:

I NEED more, this is very very very good, I like Luna's whole hidden secret, mood warden is a vey very good character, very developed too, kind of like another Twilight... not to mention Midnight now having some problems, nice names by the way...

in a way.. this all feels natural, like it would be something I could see in a comic of my little pony, where they are allowed to get a little bit more complex and dark, this is incredibly good, thank you and I cannot wait for the next chapter. fav and liked

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Good to see you back for more, friend. Thank you for your words of praise. I will do my best to keep up the good work.

On a side note: It's "Moonwarden", not "Mood Warden", but you gave me a gigantic laugh with this one. :pinkiehappy:

4748805 bah, I fail at diction, though I am glad you laughed.

you set up such an interesting world with the bat ponies, cannot wait to see how it turns out. I do love some political intrigue... and shipping :pinkiehappy:

Once again you blow me away with your excelent writing! I hope you continue hon, cause i'm here, and i'm very interested in what happens next.:heart:
Thanks hon, for the wonderful read:heart:
'Til next time-
-Eclair Y. {Eclair the Pegasus} ~:heart:

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Extremely happy to please you with my work. I will make sure to continue it to the best of my abilities. :twilightsmile:

I really hope Midnight Wing gets assigned to follow twilight on her mission into Noctralia.:twilightsmile:

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It shall get even better, Miss Octavia...

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Yes, my friend. I really should have done a blog post earlier, or at least a little announcement. I was away for a long time, having nearly no time to work on the next chapter. But I am expecting to post it sometime next week.

Very sorry to keep you guys waiting.

No worries, I'm just glad this story is still alive. There are thousands of stories with OCs but yours is one of the few that I consider great.

This is very well done. I'm excited to.read more.

Hmm, very interesting. This ’Covenant’ has intrigued me. I loved reading your last two stories and this one is turning out to be another good one.

woah, this is totally legit, I love this! the prophecy was well written, and the whole end of the world thing, not physical sense, but cultural, there is so much you can do with this, I really am enjoying this, good job sir. good job 10/10

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Thank you. I shall do my best in the future.

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Happy you think that way, friend. Stay tuned for more.

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Thank you kindly. I enjoy knowing I am providing entertainment to the readers.

Very nice story you have here, keep up the good work!! :twilightsmile::scootangel::yay:

It's a very pleasant surprise to see that this story has been updated.

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Doing my best, my friend, really. :twilightsheepish:

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It is actually my own creation. Thank you for your kind words.

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Yeah, I noticed this update came much quicker than expected.
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It reminds me of Hungarian, with some Slavic root words thrown in.

Oh my, I come home from school and check my favorites, and I get to read this gen of a story! Thank you!

Sunfall Ordain is best centure! :yay: I'd be happy to see more of her character in the story, or other stories of yours. She's just so likable!

Also, Deep Mist is getting sneaky? Hmm...

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I am glad you liked her so much. Perhaps she shall be granted her own little tale at one point. :raritywink:

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Thank you for those kind words. I am trying my best. :twilightsmile:

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Well, this chapter certainly made me happy :twilightsmile:

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My work here is done, then...

Well, not really, I need to get back to writing, more chapters ahead!

Speaking of the noctrali, Midnight and Deep Mist turned out to be two particularly strong and dependent fliers.

Might want to change that to "dependable". Other than that, great chapter.

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Ah, my mistake, of course. Thank you for the heads up.

And I am glad you enjoyed the chapter. :twilightsmile:

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No problem. And although I believe I've said this before, it doesn't hurt to reiterate - your worldbuilding is fantastic. A lot of people can create an elaborate world, but it's much harder to convey it well while simultaneously telling an interesting story, and you've pulled it off magnificently.

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Oh, look what you've done, I am blushing. :raritywink:

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I shall be adding more, yes. That is, I think that is what you meant, friend... :twilightsheepish:

Yes that what I mean and you should it's pretty good story at least i think so good job

Such a simple gift can go a long way :twilightsmile:

Twilight has at least one centure to call upon when the daggers are drawn. Lovely chapter, can't wait for the next :twilightblush:

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It's the gesture that matters most. :raritywink:

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I might be quite busy during upcoming weeks, but I shall do my best, don't you worry. :pinkiesmile:

I like this so far can't wait for the next chapter

The worldbuilding in this story is really outstanding! Also, I really like how you write Twilight, and your "OC"s are very natural and fitting, too. :heart:

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I am honoured you enjoy my work, friend. Stay tuned for more.

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