Lyra Heartstrings has been having strange dreams lately, but tonight's adventure disturbs her more than usual. Something is wrong with her roommate Bon Bon. After discovering the entrance to an underground town, Lyra finds that faceless ponies have no trouble seeing right through her...
Written in a dreamlike surrealist style, more casual than the other two surrealist stories I've written, which are linked below:
Rarity's Dream: And then the door opened...
Twilight's Dream: Unicore
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You might like this story if you also like:
The thought of caverns hiding under your house this whole time
Silent Hill level of symbolism
Faceless Monsters
Dark and Spooky Places
Ponies in Peril
Exploring in Darkness
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I love these kinds of stories.
Boardgamebrony, you are the best :D
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BRO
THANKS BRO
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Thanks Neil!
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Thank you so much! I wrote this story in 1.5 hours, so expect more in the future!
Kind of creepy. I've always been disturbed by faceless things. They're like mindless automatons. The Underville reminds me of Purgatory, like Lyra had just crossed over into a state of near-oblivion.
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Ohhhh I can definitly see that interpretation working! A purgatory of ponies...I like that...and heck you can write about that yourself as well. :)
I love faceless things. The human mind totally freaks out when it see ssomething that should be a face! :D
If you enjoyed this lyra story, you might like this dream starring Octavia, which is the closest I've ever to writing a purely dreamlike experience even more than this story or the others :D
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/204624/octavias-dream-a-feast-for-a-friend
Thank you again! :D *hugs*