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Oroboro


Employed layabout with not enough free time to write about horses.

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Camping has never been Rarity's favorite activity, but she got to pick last anniversary's, so it's only fair that Applejack gets to pick what to do this time. When their trip goes wrong, however, it's up to Rarity to fix the problem herself. No matter how much she might complain about it.

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Now with an audio production by TheLostNarrator! Go check it out!

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Comments ( 64 )

Cool. Rarity whines and Applejack tries to put up with it. :ajsmug: :raritydespair: But they're still friends. Thumbs up.

Short, but sweet! I loved it.

Short and sweet. I do love the way you portray these two's relationship. :ajsmug::raritywink:

Cute little oneshot.

Man best response to a drinking prompt I've read yet. Really well written despite being so short, and compared to what you normally see with shipping stories the plot was a breath of fresh air. Their clear devotion to each other in spite of the usual arguing was so adorbs.:pinkiesad2:

Aww! How Adorable! (-^u^-)

I'd love to read what happened before and after if you decide to continue it

Oh and I'll just leave this here since the first bit is relevant:

One shots never quite get the love they deserve,(I say this having made several under-appreciated one-shots) so let me just say I loved it!

This pairing isn't really in my top three or anything, but they're still fun to read.
If I had to ask for anything, I'd love to see a scene later when they finally made it back and have time to themselves.

Great job! :pinkiehappy:

One-shot slices of romance, always adorable.
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But they're still friends

friends

Not sure if trolling

I can relate to Rarity here, especially while hiking. I may bitch, and I may whine, and I may moan about the pain and the tiredness, but I WILL GET THERE. It may take hours, but I will eventually reach the top. What am I going to do, give up? Then I'd have to walk back down, which is just as hard as getting up!

Short, sweet and to the point. I like it.

This is a great little piece with a nice pay-off... Well done!

Very well done. It was short but I loved it, the dialogue was nice and you managed to write a really sweet piece of romance here.

I love you, you beautiful orange idiot!

Nngh... :duck::heart::ajsmug:
Best ship. Nuff said.

Keep it up. /)

Y'know, I thought I wanted you to finish Heart of an Author so that the mystery would finally be complete and solved, but apparently I just want you to have more time to write other things. This was short and cute and great.

Rarijack is best pairing. And this story is a great example of why that is true. It's nice to see how you treat the pairing when you aren't planning to brutally murder one or both of them. :p

Alright, I'm following heart of an author, I have read this, and little apple. ..loved everyone! You got a follower!

Hi! I just wanted to let you know I've put together a reading of this story. Thank you again for writing such a wonderful story! It's one of my favorite rarijack fics.

4785301 Holy shit. :pinkiegasp:

This is absolutely amazing and I love it. Thank you so much! Even getting a reading in general is very flattering and awesome, but this production goes above and beyond. Kudos to everyone involved.

Good feels and characterization throughout. I love this ship, and will sail with her 'til she sinks! Nicely done.

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Only problem with this story is Rarity is already smiling at the end when she smiles. :B This is great otherwise, excellent word economy!

Very nice. This was a very well crafted one shot. I have to say, this ship wouldn't be too bad to read. I'll have to look for more stories like this.

Very beautifully done. Bravo.

Awwww, love this pairing so much and it's quite a nice representation of what they'd be like in such a circumstance :)
Awesome job! :heart:

This was undeniably adorable! Congratulations on the EqDaily feature, because if not for it, I wouldn't have stumbled across this mega-cute story. All the squees and sappy feels. :heart:

Very cute, the best mlp shipping involves Rarity.

17th Jul 2014 ? How did I miss it ?
Well, I can thank EqD for introducing me to this RariJack fanfic.
Freaking adorable :rainbowkiss:

How many good stories happen when one is drunk?

I'm interested in an epilogue. Not sure what it would entail, but it sounds cool to me.

Short, sweet, cute, and fun. All the tasty elements of a story nugget.:twilightsmile:

I like how you show that Rarity actually fuels herself on her own dramatics.:raritycry:

Cute and to the point :twilightsmile:

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How many good stories happen when one is drunk?

At least one thus far...
:eeyup:

For drunken writing, this worked out nicely!

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You were only slightly buzzed, weren't you? :flutterrage:

Cute and funny. Nice job.

I don't know why, but I laughed all the way through.

I can totally see them arguing just like this. I quite liked it's even if RariJack isn't my most favorite ship ever. But you captured the characters well, and didn't go overboard with the storyline.
7/10. Don't feel bad, I have really high standards.

If they were ever in love this is a perfect representation of what it would be like. Perfect portrayal of an odd couple.

i listened to The Lost Narrator's reading of this and very much enjoyed it. a very good little story that made me feel happy.:twilightsmile:

Really good fic.

A great little story with one of my favorite ships. I love that Rarity was willing to push herself to exhaustion for the made she loved.

Nice job

There was fluff...
And it was fluffy!

You managed to explore these characters quite a bit in under 2,000 words. Color me impressed. Have a like and a ribbon:
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4916677 That's 3/3. :pinkiehappy:

Thanks, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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You are quite welcome. Enjoy your ribbon :twilightsmile:

Well, that was a cute read.

You should "get drunk and write something" more often. Seriously. :twilightsmile:

Side-note: I think that's what SSNE does for half the stories he writes. :rainbowwild:

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