Derp 'n Drops Manzai

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Derpy Hooves and Raindrops. One is a wall-eyed mailmare with a heart of gold; the other is a klutzy Wonderbolt Cadet with a passion for weather. They are the best of friends, and today, they're here to make you laugh with a comedy routine that they threw together! Why did they do this, you ask? Heck if I know. They were probably just bored.

Told in the style of the Touhou M-1 Grand Prix.

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Manaphy

Manaphy #1 · Jul 17th, 2014 · 3 · ·

I enjoyed it. I like the idea of addressing the confusion that can result from background pony names. Have an upvote and a favorite.

Metool Bard

Metool Bard #2 · Jul 17th, 2014 · 3 · ·

4709878 I actually had a fear that it might've been a bit too meta for the mods' tastes, considering that I'm addressing something very few people would probably know about. Thank goodness that wasn't the case.

Anyway, I'm glad you liked it.

Adam95F

Adam95F #3 · Jul 18th, 2014 · · ·

Loved it!

Sobriquet

Sobriquet #4 · Jul 19th, 2014 · · ·

This was short, simple, and entertaining.

DismantledAccount

DismantledAccount #5 · Jul 25th, 2014 · · ·

I was kind of disappointed. If there was actually some narration to go along with this piece, I probably would have enjoyed it, however.

What's here is nice, but it's not a story; it's a script and, because of that, boring--to me, at least.

Metool Bard

Metool Bard #6 · Jul 25th, 2014 · · ·

4750459 Yeah, I see where you're coming from. Again, this is just an experiment with a new writing style. I've seen other authors write amazing stories with just dialogue before, so I thought I'd give it a shot. Besides, there's no other way to really portray standup comedy like this on this site.