A collaboration with Derec mc coy
Ponies don't live forever, and as her friends slowly die, Twilight Sparkle takes on their Elements. Eventually, everything will come full circle.
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It's nice, but it started way too fast. You start reading, and the fist thing you see is the accident. It's annoying. You also need to have someone edit the little spelling errors, and you took it way too far with AJ's accent. She does not have an accent that bad. Other than that, it looks really interesting.
4715983 That part wasn't me, BTW. This a collab.
Next chapter, we'll work on those mistakes and fix the current ones.
4716224 Okay then.
where is my name? I did a lot of the writing, But I can't find my name.
Ps, I'm the other writer.
Edit: never mind... just being derp again.
Anyway, What kind of a genius comes up with this masterpiece.
Ego
She died... from falling off a ladder?
4741594 A very, very high letter. Pinkie was getting older and she landed in a position where her neck was broken.
4741773 Ah... it just doesn't seem like Pinkie would be killed by something like that, what with her reality changing ability.
4741780 Well, she is getting older.
I see your point, though.
4742492 True.
Update. Permision for the reference is granted
4814302 Cool, but maybe you should take out:
Overall, good chapter. However, I found a large amount of lower case letters where they should have been capitalized. It kinda got annoying by the fifth sentence. (And sorry about taking so long to get to reading the chapter.
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4871807 I think I missed editing a part.
4872418 Eh, that's alright.
4871807 I'll watch it next time. And it's okay if it takes long to read it. Chapter 5 will take longer...
I'm in Hungary. So I can't really write...
But it will come.
Thanks for the feedback
4884134 Okay, no problem!
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This is interesting thus far, bit quick but that's just me. Otherwise it's a good story and so interested in seeing it finished
Yay you updated it..m but I'm still gonna wait till its finished to start reading.
I don't know why, but the Angel Jr. made me almost cry.
Saddest story ever. Reminds me of a PMV I watched a while ago.
5918040 Wow, I made someone almost cry!
That's one thing off my to-do list*hugs*...wow. Just.... Wow.
Well, I am very late, but I definitely liked that "twist," for lack of a better word. This was definitely an enjoyable story.
6302690 Thanks!
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I am way to late.... But, care for a spinn off?
7906487 You can do it, if you'd like!