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ZemaBato


I do a lot of reading and lurking. I also write stuffs. I may or may not look like Krillin.

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This story is a sequel to Applejack Goes Super Saiyan


Ever since Applejack ascended to a super saiyan, everyone has been impressed. Nobody was more impressed, however, than Apple Bloom. Determined to follow in her sister's footsteps, she trains in hopes of ascending into a super saiyan herself.

Unfortunately for her, not everything goes the way she wants.

Special thanks to totallynotabrony for editing and proofreading!

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Comments ( 36 )

This seems... Interesting.
Consider my interest aroused :coolphoto:

Don't worry spike. I can help. You just need to distract them so I can charge my attack. For 5 seasons.

Apple bloom had an own count before she was krillin :applecry:

Well Apple Bloom, it could be worse. You could be Yamcha.

4703588 oh God, everyone's dead.

So, who's Vegeta and Piccolo? And Chi Chi and Bulma? Maybe Rainbow Dash is Yamcha?

“NO!” Apple Bloom stomped a hoof. “If mah sister can become a super sagan, then so can I!”

And by her logic, she should be too. It would take time, but Granny Smith said it best: “If you wish to make an apple pie from scratch, you must first invent the universe!”

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Poor Apple Bloom!

Spike is Piccolo? That's hilarious! Of course, now he has to eat Garble and Celestia (what? Celestia is obviously Kami.)

Oh man! I need more, like, now! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

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Implying that's the only thing? :trixieshiftright:

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Honestly haven't thought of who'd be who else. I did imply who Piccolo would be, though. :raritywink:

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That's beautiful~ :raritystarry:

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Celestia would have to be someone else.

"Luuuuuuuunaaaa." Celestia bellowed, her muzzle stained with chocolate and strawberry frosting. "LUUUUUUUNAAAA."

"W-what is it, dear sister...?" the princess of the night replied. She looked up at Celestia, who towered above her younger sister. Her stomach prevented her from not sitting upright.

"I saw a parasprite," she intoned. "It was pretty."

"...Goddammit, Tia," Luna muttered. "No more cake for you."

In the original Dragonball, Kurillin was a valuable member of the team, second only to Goku in power and skill. It wasn't until Z that he suddenly turned into a comic relief character.

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I refer you to the first World Martial Arts Tournament, where he fought Bacterium, and won by knocking him out by farting right in his face.

He was always a comedy character. Thing was, he was also effective at gaining sympathy, and also dying at key moments. He was a comedy character that mattered, basically, and the serious scenes that involved him usually affected another major character more. The only exception to that was his dealings with Android 18, and even that played more into Cell's perfection and the eventual battle between Cell and Goku/Gohan.

Krillin never stopped being a valuable member of the team, too. Even in the later stages of the show, he didn't fight much, but he took on the role of "mentor to the younger generation that could still hold his own up to a point." And at the end of the day, he was still the single strongest human on earth.

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He was also quite good with his wits, he did help with the invisible man in the baba tournament, tricked chiatzu, and usually his loses are generally to opponents both strong and cunning, he even put up a good fight against goku in the semi-finals.

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Well, with the invisible man, it was a combination of wits and Bulma's boobs.

Krillin is probably one of the bravest Z warriors. Most of the time, he KNOWS he's going to lose, and probably die. Yet, he goes right in anyways. He even stands up against his friends, too. Saving Vegeta, or Saving Android 18, or saving Android 16, Krillin has proven himself time and again.

"NEXT TIME ON DRAGONBA- MY LITTLE PONY"
*The next day at school*

So Apple Bloom is Krillin, and Spike is Piccolo? Who is Yamcha? How about Tien? You must make next chapter!!!

I get it! Spike is Piccolo, right?

Now I'm waiting for an Apple Bloom owned counter.

I swore that AB would end-up as Gohan due to her looking up to AJ and all the jokes of her getting beaten up during training. Becoming Krillin interesting twist.
Good job.

4705864 All true. And yet, he's still so afraid of horror video games!

Even if I'd had no interest, I would've been forced to check it out by that combination of cover art and title. You can't not read that.

But I had interest anyways, and you did not disappoint! Poor Spike. Never catches a break.

Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!

So, If Spike grew back his lower half... does that mean there are 2 more Dragon Balls to collect? :pinkiecrazy:

The crowd ate everything up, oblivious to their impending danger. “YES! YES! YES!” they shouted.

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YES!

pinkie pie is majin buu
rainbow dash is probably vegeta
twilight could very well be gohan
tirek is cell

4703588 i don't know what this Yamcha is but it sounds just like Flash Sentry

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Oh come now, that's rather unfair. Yamcha was actually pretty cool in Dragon Ball.

5750156 and yet he needed a wish to talk to girls.

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And comparing himself to Flash is still an unfair insult.

Oh, I am so bad. Go ahead, you can boo if you like.

5750534 actually you're right.

4755848 can u please write one like the one like the first story applejack gose super saiyon but with the other mane 6 and The other CNCs, And Nyx who is twilight's daughter or adopted daughter for me please:raritystarry::raritystarry::fluttercry::applecry::raritycry:

SSJ2 apple bloom. I'm calling it

Apple Bloom Owned Counter: 4.

Personally, i think Apple Bloom should be Goten, that would make Scootaloo Kid Trunks, so perhaps later on in the story they could learn the fusion dance and become a fusion character.

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