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Astral Star and Company


An enthusiastic group of fans, getting together and sharing our ideas!

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When I was young, I wasn't happy. I wasn't free or rich, I didn't even have a family. My childhood was a desolate thing.

I struggled to survive in the oldest, biggest hive ever to be built outside the Changeling Kingdom. War and poverty plague my home as the Hive prepares for a conflict it could not possibly win. I learnt to survive here when I was merely a new born. Foraging from scraps and hiding from sight, always looking over my shoulder.

I don't have a name, but this is my story.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 18 )

*sniffle* Poor honor...Hope her story is a good one in the end!

How could your changeling survive with no love flowing to it?

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From what I gathered from A Canterlot Wedding, Changelings may feed on love, but they can also survive without it. Looking at the changeling anatomy, you can see a very effective predator, if the hard chitin shell, stealth tactics and fangs didn't give it away already. As implyed by Chrysallis, the changelings may have been starving before they got anywhere near Canterlot.

So, love is neccessary to live not much so to survive. Obviously, a changeling's going to be very weak without love compared to one with some.

~Honour Bound

4702340 I'm really enjoying this story. I hope this unfortunate changeling finds or steals love from somewhere.

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Hopefully, he'll / I'll never need to steal again...

~Honour Bound

There hooves beat the sandstone ground in a synchronised march around the central fountain.

their*

The guards stopped there march to face the newcomer.

their*

The Changeling City was a mass of Stone houses, clumsily carved into the low mountain’s face.

Stone should not be capitalized.

I enjoyed this story. I shall wait for more.

Was that... Luna? Or some lady-in-the-lake kind of creature?

And this is why you always read the terms and conditions before accepting

There is an inconsistency in not understanding soeech i think becaused he seemed to understand perfectly What that angry guy said. Anyways i look forward to more though there are some grammar errors. Did he remove the arrow in his hoof?

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Same reason how you could single out a word by attaching it to meaning, without actually understanding it, just by hearing it. Plus, he could tell what others want by the tone of their speech, their expression, body language and actions. If someone ran at me screaming after I vaporised his friend, I don't need to be a linguist to know he wants to kill me.
And no he didn't, he just can't feel it.

5416744 This story likely fits the concept of "two souls" in one body for which i have created a group for. You are welcome to join. https://www.fimfiction.net/group/206090/two-bodies-one-soul and you are also welcome to read my story which inspired from. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/192819/precious-soul-of-mine

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Thanks! I'll be sure to take you up on your offer.

~Honour Bound (\^/)

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