You know what? Being the only machine in Equestria with a living soul can be a real pain! All these new emotions are really tricky and I have no one to talk who understands. Twilight and Tinker Track built me to help in the past but now that task is done, what is there for me now? I wish something exciting would happen.
I should have been careful for what I wished for because things just got very strange. With hypnotized ponies everywhere and who of all races but the changelings asking for our help. Are they really sincere in their need or is this just another trick?
(This is the sequel of " http://www.fimfiction.net/story/100187/the-mission-of-buzzbot " and relies heavily on knowing the fore running story. I would strongly recommend reading that first or you may find yourselves a bit lost, nevertheless it is a stand alone tale that can be enjoyed from the word go)
(Also big thanks to silent_stars for their editing!)
(Art work by the talented Pa-Kalsha, check out her art page here http://pa-kalsha.deviantart.com/ )
You have a period in your title.
That's as far as I'm going to get.
5493667 Okay, thanks for your comment
A little presentation can go a long way. An image on the story, a link to the previous story in the description, cleaning up the description a tad can all draw in more readers.
As for the content of the story itself, it's much better than the voting would indicate. A shame that it's a low read story.
5788886 Thanks so much for your input. I am working on getting some cover art for it as soon as possible. Good idea about the link to the previous story, will sort that now.
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I think if you attach this story as a sequel to your previous story via the FIMFiction interface it will automatically put in a link to the previous story in this story's description.
5790460 Thanks and thanks again. I have made an effort to tidy up the short intro to make it more interesting.
well that was exciting :D
5900417 Yep we're building up to the climax now
Thanks for taking the time to read it
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yay! ^^
woooo!, can't wait for the interactions with Buzz's new form
5929202 Thanks for your continued interest
cheers me up to see people enjoying themselves!
oooooooooooooooh!
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my mind
you give to the world the world gives back
7107856 Glad you appreciate the concept
Nice to know the message is coming through
If i were chrysalis i would have either left or fuckin murdered someone with all that asshole treatment
7110808 question the queen is the mother of all workers in the hive?
7596290 Based them on loosely bees with a little tweaking. The idea is that the queen is in theory the mother of all the others in a hive. They can 'adopt' lost drones from other hives, but seldom do. I reasoned that as they were in such a desperate situation that they were forced to take in more strays.
Hope that answers the question
7596674 ok
Waferthin.