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Writing about magic, romance and the bonds of friendship!

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Written as part of the "Daisy Chain" collaboration, a new crack shipping prompt series. Previous part here - Daisy Chain Part 2: Maud Pie x Applejack
EDIT: Next part here - Daisy Chain Part 4: Teddie Safari X Pinkie Pie


Applejack receives a letter from an old friend, with a cryptic message to meet in Dodge Junction. Something tells her not to trust it, but with her helpful nature, she can't keep herself away.


A/N: Fair warning, this is something very different from what I usually write, as I wanted to try something new :pinkiehappy: If you want to find out more about, or get involved with, the Daisy Chain project, check out fimfic4ever or send him a message. Incidentally, he also put together the cover art (link) for this, so big shoutout for that - thanks man!

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Comments ( 11 )

Nice job UB, I loved it, well worth the wait mate :twilightsmile:

It was very interesting reading a story with Teddie Safari, I actually haven't seen any stories with her in it, plus she's paired up with my favourite pony, so it's twice as awesome :pinkiehappy:

Have fun with your prompt dramatic_spoon, this will be funny :rainbowlaugh:

I read the notes and this is all I can think of http://youtu.be/-rutX0I6NxU

4703291

As a S4 background pony, she's relatively new, and therefore mostly "unclaimed" as far as background ponies go, so writers have a lot of leeway to play with her history and characterization.

Interestingly, Teddy slips herself into the Indiana Jones/Daring Do role for the action, but where the romance part is concerned, she acts more like Elsa from Last Crusade.

Hah I am impressed you managed to make it into something this awesome.
Definitely the right call to make Teddy into whatever you wanted. I was not expecting you'd make her a more seedy Daring Doo, but that definately worked wonders. :rainbowlaugh:

It was an interesting idea to let them go on an adventure. I'm amazed you pulled that off within the limit really.

4704283 He did do a pretty good job :ajsmug: plus Teddie was awesome :twilightsheepish:

4704036 I hope we get to see more of Teddie in the future, particularly Teddie x Applejack. I think it works in a similar way to Daring Do x Rainbow, but something that makes it a little more awesome is the lack of wings, it's kind of an extra obstacle for the pair on their adventures. I must have more Teddiejack/Applesafari now! :rainbowlaugh:

4703291 Thanks man! I'm glad I did it, as it was something new and fun to write.


4703444 Mission accomplished :pinkiehappy:


4704036 Yup, I got a lot of inspiration from Indiana Jones/Daring Do, as that was the only major thing that stood out to me in Teddie's episode (or rather, the episode she was in). I'll be interested to see if dramatic_spoon goes for a similar characterisation, or takes it in a different direction.


4704283 Aw, thanks! Glad you liked my characterisation of Teddie. I eventually settled on this because it seemed like the most exciting of the different ideas I had, and I'm quite happy with how I portrayed her. And I'm actually amazed I pulled it off too :twilightsheepish: It took a fair bit of work to make it all fit!

4705344 Well if ya ever feel like doing 'something new' again, I for one wouldn't object to more Applesafari :twilightsheepish:

I can't wait for Dramatic_Spoon's to come out and the prompt he'll give me! I'm so excited. Knowing my story'll either have something sad or something funny! By the way, this story was epic! And he gave the Orthros a purpose!

If I keep writing long winded replies to this chain I'll be here all day but suffice to say that I found this amazing and look forward to seeing more of your work, even with this being as you said "something different" for you. :twilightsmile:

6361014 Well thank you very much (and welcome to the site!) :pinkiehappy: This is indeed something different for me, but looking back over it, I think it's something I'd like to do again. I hope my other works don't disappoint!

6361266 Thanks, :twilightblush: and if your other stories are written as well as this one I won't be. :raritywink:

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