I dream of a man whose hopes never end.
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Sweetie Belle has a long record of little "accidents." It seems like everything she does just ends in disaster. After another little accident sparks a fight with Rarity, Sweetie is left to wonder if she really is cursed. Is there anypony to convince her otherwise?
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That was a cute story! Great work!
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Thanks! Glad you liked it.
I guess Sweetie Belle is...
the Danger Zone.
Adorable, fun to read, and got me right in the feels
Combine those things, and you have a great Slice of Life/sad Sweetie fic. And you have done just that.
This was an excellent story, a good Sweetie Belle fiction all in all.
This:
And this:
Had me laughing rather hard.
Keep up the good work, my friend.
Cheers!
4693016
Oh! You changed your penname, didn't you? Thanks for your input.
Derpy to the rescue!
Very cute fic. Poor Sweetie is a bit of a klutz, but that's okay!
I really enjoyed this story, but my only complaint is that I feel the ending is rushed for the most part.
This was really good. It felt like it could actually be an episode. Well done.
That was cute, and had a morale behind it, I like it. Ditzy approves.
D'awwwwww! I about died.
I think you're missing a word there.
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Being a klutz just makes her that much more lovable!
4693282
Duly noted. Anything in particular you think could be improved upon?
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I'd watch it, but I'm a little biased... Not to mention there isn't an episode I wouldn't watch.
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I'll just have to try a little harder next time, then.
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Nice catch. I fixed it.
4694019
*Readies my D'awwfibilator* I'm ready.
GLARED. not LEERED.
Leering is what a pervert does.
Glaring is what an angry person does.
4694267
Noted and changed.
4694620
Eh? It got featured?
I've seen it hanging around the popular box, but I haven't seen it make the feature box. Did I miss it?
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No, they're different.
The one on the right is just the popular box. The feature box is the one that cycles through ten stories. I think the bottom three are reserved for the top performing updated stories while the first seven are for the hottest stories.
4694019 Maybe something where Sweetie does something right actually.
This is a very nice story. Quite enjoyable.
I would really like to see what happens with dinner though.
In addition, I could see this story being the springboard for an epic Sweetie story. Just imagine... Her true calling could end up being some sort of disaster response pony. All of these problems around her could just a manifestation of this talent preparing her to stay calm in emergencies. Given the way Ponyville is, I'm sure having a pony that specializes in disaster response would be a good thing.
Wasn't really a big fan of the moral for the story, but I still enjoyed what I read for the visuals and the dialogue. Pretty good for a short read, glad I read it.
And then Ponyville burned to the ground for the second time that week.
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--arcum42
Cute
Thumb and added to my recommendation group.
That awkward moment when...
"lied strewn across the floor" -> This should be "lay". "Lied" is only for the kind of lying where you tell a falsehood.
The story was rather cute and funny, up to the end, which contains a moral which I think is, frankly, wrong. As good your intentions may be, it's the results of your actions that really matter. If I take my car to the mechanic, I'd rather it be fixed by a rude jerk whose only motive is getting rich and have my car actually work, than have it shoddily patched by a kind, pleasant guy who gives me a "friend discount" and cookies while I wait and have my car break just down again the next day. It's the only outlook on life that has ever made sense to me.
7132581 (Flarity Belle)
even less with a foal there
Later. . .
Rarity: Sweetie, realy, you brun the whole house down
Sweetie: Sorry rarity. . .
Rarity: No it's my fault, I should have know this was going to happen, I mean you managed to burn juice before.
Sweetie: *hung her head low*
Rarity: *fast* I was joking, I mean. . . It happened, you don't try to do it *nervous laugh*
Fire Ponies: *coming* How did THAT happened?
Sweetie: I tried to cook
Fire Ponies: You're Sweetie Belle, right?
Sweetie: yes ?
Fire Ponies: Ah! I understand now, you're the one who got famous managing to burn juice
Sweetie: *hung her head lower*
Rarity: *slap him* That's not something to say! Go away
. . .
A few moments later
Twilight: Ok. . . Well, I've seen weirder so ok, I belive you
Rarity: Thank you. Oh by the way, can we stay here, since we kind of don't have a house?
Twilight: *surprised* . . .of course, come in
Ps: sorry for the "Go away" that seems out of place, it's just that I only think of that or something that a lady shouldn't say
PPS: About the burned juice:
(never let Sweetie Belle cook)
Sweet
A pot of apple butter? You think Sweetie Belle can't screw that up?