Framed for a murder that she didn't commit, Twilight is forced into exile in the badlands to avoid her punishment. Will doing what she needs to do to survive turn her into the very fiend that they thought her to be?
Oh my, that was friggen horrible. Absoulutly horrible. Out of them all I feel bad for Sweetie Belle the most, a crushed head by her sisters best friend. And poor Cheerilee will probably kill herself as well when they discover this.
You, dear author, are fast becoming my favorite writer on the site. I'm so glad that Darcy introduced me to your work. Keep it up, you brilliant bastard.
5218125 At least read chapter 3.3. It easily the best so far, and not just of this story.
You know... I thought I don't give a buck, but halfway through I felt the story got a little too extreme. Whatever. It won't stop me from clopping, of course.
I feel bad for ponies who will find all the corpses. I wonder how many of them won't vomit and scream within 5 seconds. But Cherelee's torture is the greatest so far. Raising and personally knowing so many foals and then seeing them die one by one... I don't think anything can beat that. Damn. My imagination is too vivid.
Drowning in piss is my favorite. I'm not the biggest fan of blood.
I am currently reading this chapter for the fourth or fifth time - I'm just dropping by to tell you that this is the definitely greatest thing you've ever written.
8861649 Hey headless rainbow I don’t want to lie but I would give this story 9/10 because I did notice some spelling mistakes but however it was a great idea!
*reads a couple chapters*
oh god why did i skip the warnings !!!
im outta here!replygif.net/i/221.gif
ill admit that even though these arent really my thing i couldnt help but laugh manically as i read this
The fuck just happened. I don't ociffer how it know happened.
Oh my, that was friggen horrible. Absoulutly horrible. Out of them all I feel bad for Sweetie Belle the most, a crushed head by her sisters best friend. And poor Cheerilee will probably kill herself as well when they discover this.
You going for a record, bro?
I honestly have no idea why I read this... Meh I still enjoy reading it though!
Im still reading this NO WE ARE STILL READING THIS WHY?
all i can think is this
There is no such thing as mercy on the rape train
You, dear author, are fast becoming my favorite writer on the site. I'm so glad that Darcy introduced me to your work. Keep it up, you brilliant bastard.
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At least read chapter 3.3. It easily the best so far, and not just of this story.
5218229 It was hilarious!
5220308 I did go above and beyond for the kill count on this one, yes.
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Always glad if someone can get off to this
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I enjoy the murder and torture (especially the psychological, like with Cheerilee) more than the rape. The rape is nice, too, though.
You know... I thought I don't give a buck, but halfway through I felt the story got a little too extreme. Whatever. It won't stop me from clopping, of course.
I feel bad for ponies who will find all the corpses. I wonder how many of them won't vomit and scream within 5 seconds. But Cherelee's torture is the greatest so far. Raising and personally knowing so many foals and then seeing them die one by one... I don't think anything can beat that. Damn. My imagination is too vivid.
Drowning in piss is my favorite. I'm not the biggest fan of blood.
>not keeping Silver Spoon
I am currently reading this chapter for the fourth or fifth time - I'm just dropping by to tell you that this is the definitely greatest thing you've ever written.
Nooooooo! You killed Button and Dinky! How could you?!
I liked how you started this, but I started to getting queasy as soon as you introduced cannon characters.
RD is Italian?
I have mixed feelings for this one...
Oh well, to keep reading.
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Hey headless rainbow I don’t want to lie but I would give this story 9/10 because I did notice some spelling mistakes but however it was a great idea!