Part 1 - Chapter 7: An Unexpected Visitor
The nagging feeling makes the hairs on the back of your neck stand up. You turn around quickly and come nose to nose with a light brown mare with stunning emerald eyes. Autumn jumps back in mild shock.
"Oh... I'm sorry! I just saw you in the park on my walk and I thought I would say hi, but I got nervous and saw you were reading, but I didn't want to bother you, but I was interested where you were in the book-" She begins to speak quickly, stammering over her words while pressing her hooves together. You take a relaxed breath. All those years of Fluttershy following got you on edge.
Calm down, big guy. Fluttershy wouldn't pull anything. She's a changed mare. You hope. For both of your sakes.
"Hey! How's it going?" you ask your prospective date, attempting to calm her nervousness. A smile curls on her face.
"Um. Good. Pretty good. Um.. I-I got your text.. I was just waiting until I wasn't busy... but then I saw you and thought that maybe you would want some... company?" she asks hopefully. You smile and close your book.
"Of course," you warmly say to her, patting the empty spot on the bench. She meekly takes a seat next to you. "Do you go on walks every day at lunch? I've just recently started coming to the park.” Autumn nods to you.
"I try to do it every day. My friend says I should try to get out of the library more often," she replies. You turn to her, prepared with an easy question, in an attempt to play dumb.
"Oh? Do you work at the library? Sounds like the perfect job since you love books so much.” A light sparks in her eyes as she turns to you.
"Ohmygoodness. Yes! Ever since I was a filly I wanted to work in a library. They take you on such an adventure and you can do anything in them! They help you forget everything that is bothering you and-" She stops and her face fills with a deep blush. "Sorry, I got a little excited there." You chuckle to yourself.
"It's no big deal. I thought it was cute. Reminds me of a friend of mine from Ponyville," You answer with a smile. She looks away and hair falls gently in front of her face.
"You think I'm cute?" she barely whispers through a blushing face.
"Of course. Why else would we have a date tomorrow?" You give her the best smile you have, and place your arm behind her on the park bench. She looks back at you with those beautiful eyes and a light blush paints her cheeks.
"You're right... I'm pretty excited. That's not bad is it? To be excited?" Your heart leaps for a moment, but guilt also racks your brain.
“Of course not, silly.”
That's when your gut drops. What would Fluttershy say if she saw this? You scan the park, worried if she followed you here. All you see is other ponies eating lunch and some children playing. The coast seems to be clear. You have to tell her. She deserves to know. You can't get her hopes too high... She's working so hard for you. But you have to love her because YOU love her, not because she's working for you.
"Umm... You said you had friends in Ponyville?" Autumn asks. You snap out of your reverie.
"Oh. Yeah. I have a bunch of friends in Ponyville. Have you been there? It's quite a cozy little town." Her bashful demeanor flips like a light switch to a sullen, vacant expression. Clearly you hit a nerve.
"Yeah... I grew up there, but I wasn't there very long. Only until I was around 4 or 5,” She answers.
"Why's that? Family move to a different city?" You ask, trying to find a safe way to continue the conversation.
"It's k-kind of a long story... and it's a little sensitive to me. I'm s-sorry. I'll tell you someday... but I need some time. I haven't even told my closest friend yet,” she answers weakly.
"Alright then, I won't press. Tell me about your friend,” you ask, attempting to change the subject.
"She's so nice. Much prettier than me too. She works at a school not too far from here. She tries so hard to make sure all of the students have everything they need.” Autumn's demeanor seems to lighten up at the change of subject.
"You know, her name wouldn't happen to be Mulberry would it?" you deliver another easy question. Autumn looks up to you and beams.
"You know Mulberry?" she asks excitedly.
"Yeah! She's my next door neighbor. She was the one I helped few weeks ago when she had some... personal problems."
"Oh! That must be so nice to have her around. I only see Mulberry at the library. She talks about her kids so much and how helpful I am to her... I feel like I'm kind of helping the little ones out too... but wait … is she okay?" Autumn asks.
“Yeah... I think she's doing better now... you should see how she's doing tonight. I think she would really appreciate it.”
Her feet sway a little bit on the bench and a light breeze catches her hair and pulls it to the side. Giving you just a bit of a glimpse of Fluttershy standing off in the distance, watching you. Her face is... unreadable. Guilt fills your stomach. There is no choice. You have to explain things now. Especially before you help her move in tonight. How are you going to explain this?
"She talked before about having a really bad coltfriend... which I can understand. I've had a really bad experience with a stallion too. Was it related to that?” Autumn asks quietly.
"Yeah, it was. You had a bad stallion too?" you ask her curiously.
"Yeah. It's also sorta sensitive though... I'm sorry," she answers, looking away.
"No really, it's fine,” you reply. “I probably shouldn't have asked.” You look down at your watch and you see you are nearly late to get back. "But, I think I should probably head back to work." Autumn nods to you.
"Yeah... me too. I'll text you. I promise!" She catches you by surprise and wraps you up in a tight hug. Her fur feels warm against your skin and places the same feeling on the inside of your chest You wrap an arm around her and notice that she smells like fall time.
"Sounds good... I'll see ya around," you answer. She breaks away and trots off.
"Bye-bye, Anon!" You watch her head out of the park with a wide smile, but you can't help but look around. Fluttershy is nowhere to be seen. With a heavy sigh and a bad feeling in your stomach, you head back to work. At least you are nearly done with the book... and it won't be as weird when you mention you knew she worked in a library. It was a little surprising to you that she hasn't even found out what happened to Mulberry yet...
None of that is even close to the big question though. How much did Fluttershy see? What did she hear?
How is she going to react?
And you are going to help her pick out a pet tonight. This has potential to hurt everything that you had been working towards with her. A large part of you felt guilty for still entertaining the possibility of going out with Autumn. Great job, Anon. Love struck between three different ponies. What are you going to do next?
You have to judge how you tackle the situation by how Fluttershy is acting this afternoon. Setting your hand on the entrance to the glass building, you step inside. As you step inside the elevator, you look at the shorter ponies riding it with you. Are their lives just as hard as yours? Sometimes it seems like all of life's drama gets attracted to you like flies to an open flame.
The elevator stops at your floor. Guess you wouldn't know unless you asked. Stepping onto your floor, you head towards your office, keeping a close eye out for your assistant.
"Hey Anon!" The masculine voice behind you makes you jump. Spinning around, you find your boss Brand.
"Oh. Hey. How's it going? You seem awful chipper,” you mention in observation.
"Oh yeah. Things are great. I met a new stallion last night, all my meetings were cleared out this morning, and the cherry on top is that I've got a date tonight!" he says proudly.
"That's awesome man. Good job! " you tell him honestly. It's really great to see Brand so happy. It's such a great change of pace.
"Yeah!, well I won't keep ya busy." says Brand in a tone that infers that HE is the one who actually wants to go.
"Oh, alright. Well thanks. I'll see ya around,” you answer, confused why he would suddenly start and stop conversation with you.
"See ya," he says, turning towards the elevators.
You head back towards your office, your brain full of fu-
Oh, one last thing." You sigh. Turning back to Brand, you do your best not to seem irritated by the constant interruptions today.
"Whassup.”
"Your secretary seemed down in the dumps when I saw her. Everything alright?" Brand asks. The plunging feeling in your stomach returns.
"Yeah. I think so. I was about to go talk to her,” you answer.
"Alright then. Just remember that one of the most important parts of being professional is knowing when it's inappropriate to be professional." You nod your head.
"Take care, Anon," Brand waves to you.
"You too." Turning back to your original destination, you step into your office and slouch down in your chair.
"Uhm. Sir?" A quiet feminine voice calls from your door. You look up reflexively at the door, which is part way open with Fluttershy peering in. Your blood runs cold.
"Hey, I just got back. What's up?” you ask casually. She looks away, but carries in a few stacks of papers.
"I, um. Finished these a little bit ago. I wanted... wanted to know if you would like to look at them?" Her sad tone shoots daggers into your soul as you feel numbness replacing guilt.
"Yeah, sure." She drops the papers on your desk with a thud, then turns to leave.
"Hey Flutters, sit down for a second. I think we should talk about something." You call to her. She turns to you, her face covered by her mane, in strict contrast to the look that she prepared this morning with such care in your bathroom. After pausing for a moment, she closes the door quietly and sits in front of your desk.
"H-have I done something wrong?"she asks quietly.
"No. I have,” you answer her question. Standing up from your chair, you move around to the front of the desk and sit on it. "I've been trying to find a good time to tell you, but I haven't... and I couldn't. After I saw that you followed me to the park. I think I should tell you now."
She looks down and stares at the carpet. Fluttershy mumbles something under her breath.
"What's that?" you ask.
"I-I'm sorry I followed you..." she repeats sadly.
"No. That's fine. Well, I mean. Maybe a bit excessive, but that's not what I want to talk about." She looks up at you and you see the redness to her eyes. Why didn't you just tell her earlier, Anon?
"Fluttershy, before I knew you were coming here... I met somepony,” you calmly tell her. The little pegasus breaks into tears and places her hooves over her face.
"I knew it... I knew all of this has been too good to be true. I knew something was wrong,” Fluttershy cries in your office.
"No Shy, that isn't what I'm saying. I'm not in a relationship,” you interrupt her cries, attempting to clear up what you think was her misconception.
"Then what could it possibly be?" she cries exasperatedly. You kneel down on a knee to get on eye level with her tear-stained, makeup smeared face.
"That first night was when everything changed. I couldn't have imagined that in twenty four hours, that what we could have would mean so much to me." She smiles a little, just for a second. "Now... I don't know. I haven't had to make this hard of a decision before. Before... it would have been a no-brainer for me, but today, everything is completely different." She sniffs and looks up at you.
"Did the two of you..." she asks, her voice trailing off.
"No. We only exchanged numbers and made a date." You tell her honestly.
"When is it?"
"Tomorrow,” you answer honestly. She looks down at the floor and mumbles something under her breath.
"What's that?" She looks up at you and gulps.
"Please don't go,” she asks weakly. The question catches you off guard and the internal conflict renews itself. Of course Fluttershy, anything for you. Are you taking orders from your stalker, Anon?
"I don't know if I can do that... It would feel like I led her on Shy,” you answer, alluding to your internal conflict.”
"If you go... aren't you leading me on?” she asks. You gulp, hearing your words heard against you. How can you possibly remedy this? You can't lie to her. That wouldn't be remotely fair. Yet, how can you possibly choose between two people you met within twenty four hours of each other? Shy is trying really hard and everything, but what if she relapses?
Then again, what if denying her this causes her to relapse. A shiver runs down your spine. One date with Autumn and one with Fluttershy. Then you decide.
"I owe her one date, Shy. One date. After that, I'll let her down easy. She isn't that bad of a person. She's Mulberry's friend that she talked about this morning,” you tell her in an attempt to clear the air.
"I knew there was a reason you wanted to avoid the library..." she sighs to herself. You hold her hooves and bring her face to face.
"One date, then it's all over. I'm all yours."
Is that really the truth, Anon? She looks into your eyes and you see the hurt, vulnerable filly inside of her screaming, crying... begging. For you.
"O-okay. One date,” she answers quietly. You wrap you arms around her.
"Thank you."
"But I want a date too,” she quickly redoubles.
"Done. Anywhere you want. Any time." You break the hug and she seems to be a little happier. Taking a box of tissues off your desk, you wipe off some of the smeared makeup from your shirt as she checks herself in a mirror.
"I look terrible,” she says to herself.
"It's not that bad. I'm sure you could fix it up in a jiffy," you reply to the filly whose mascara has run past her cheeks and down her neck.
"You are a horrible liar, Anon," she half-heartedly giggles. Your throat tightens. She fixes the worst of it with a small compact and takes a deep breath. "Better?"
"Better,” you answer firmly.
"Really?" She look up at you, then casts her gaze aside.
“Really. Now then! I'll grab ya when we are done for today. We aren't going to find Perry the Parakeet in an office building." Fluttershy giggles and nods. "I won't keep ya locked up in here then."
"Oh, I don't mind..." She catches herself with a blush. “did I just say that out loud?” she whispers.
"Back to professionalism, Miss Fluttershy." you answer firmly.
"Right, sir. Uhm. Would you mind if I recheck that? I-I think I rushed through the last few pages." You open the files she set on your desk, and browse them quickly. The last page is visibly stained with tears and has numerous glaring issues.
"Of course,” you answer calmly.
"Thank you sir." She says, heading back to her desk.
What are you going to do with her?
The rest of the afternoon goes by fairly quickly. At one point, Brand popped in to mention how better Fluttershy seemed. Of course, you buttered him up, saying it was due to his amazing advice and council. He just ate it up. You and Fluttershy work like a seamless machine. She reviews your work and you review hers. Every single thing comes out perfect and the box of work seems to get smaller for once. It's really amazing how good of a team the two of you make.
She even made you some of that liquid delight that keeps you alive. Something about her coffee just perks your entire day. When you finally get a moment to look at the clock, it's already time to go. A light knock on your open office door signals the sign of the beaming yellow pegasus.
"Ready, Anon?" Fluttershy asks excitedly.
"Yep. I think we've put a big enough dent in this for today. Let's get outta here."
After closing and locking your office, you follow the yellow pegasus out of the building and out into the early evening air. The two of you walk side by side on the side walk, relishing the benefits of a hard day's work. "So, what's the plan for tonight,” you ask.
"Uhm. Well I need to grab some of my things from your apartment, but otherwise I think we should grab a bite to eat, then find a cute little critter."
"Sounds good to me. To my place it is. I'd sure love to get out of these clothes." Fluttershy looks up at you in disbelief, her face painted the color of a fresh strawberry.
"Into more casual clothes, Shy. Mind out of the gutter."You sigh. That other Fluttershy is still deep down in there somewhere...
"O-oh. Right." she says in a slightly defeated tone.
"Long day?"
"Y-yeah... it's just really hard sometimes..." She watches the ground at the two of you walk back to your place.
"I know Shy. I'm proud of you. I know it must take a lot to push past those urges." She nods, probably more to herself than to your comment. "Have you been thinking of what critter you want?"
Fluttershy's eyes light up and she leaps into the air, her wings keeping her aloft. "Oh, how could I possibly decide without getting to know all of them. What if I can't decide Anon? How could I possibly take only one home? What if they all like me? I don't want to hurt any of their feelings Anon... I don't know." You lightly snicker.
"Sounds like I'll have to keep you in line so you don't walk out with half the store."
Her eyes light up and turn to you. "Do you think they would let me?” she asks.
“Probably not,” you answer with a smile.
“Aww,” she answers defeatedly. Your stomach grumbles as the two of you near your destination.
"Oh man. What do you wanna eat? I'm not sure if we will have enough time to cook up something fresh." The yellow pegasus ponders to herself.
"I don't know. Is there something quick? Like sandwiches?" she asks.
"I'm pretty sure there is a shop near your place that delivers. We could try it out,” you mention.
"You would know better than I would Anon." she says with a smile. As you approach your apartment building, you hold the door open for your guest and hop in the elevator to your floor. You can't help but wonder how Mulberry might be doing.
While Fluttershy grabs her things, maybe you should check up on her. Just to make sure things are okay. The door opens and the two of you exit the metal box. The yellow mare hums a happy tune as she follows you to your apartment. She doesn't fail to notice your glance towards Mulberry's door.
"Do you think she is okay?" she asks curiously.
"Yeah. I think so. Should I check up on her?" you ask. She seems hesitant, but looks up to you and nods.
"Alright. I'll see how she's doing after I change,” you affirm. You unlock the door to your apartment and step inside the cool sanctum of home. With a great stretch, you already feel more relaxed.
"Uhm. Do you mind if I take a quick shower Anon?" Fluttershy asks. You untuck your shirt and head towards your room.
"Nah. What's mine is yours."
"Thanks, Anon!" You step into your room and quickly change out of your work clothes and into something more comfortable. T-shirt and jeans should be fine. Getting ready to head back out into the hallway, you move to the bathroom door to tell Fluttershy that you are going to check out Mulberry.
"Umf~" you hear just beyond the other side of the door, blended in with the running water from the shower head. You do a one-eighty and decide to see your neighbor. She'll figure it out when you aren't around. Leaving the door unlocked, you walk to Mulberry's door and knock lightly.
"Oh! Lemme get that," you hear from inside. Was she talking to someone? She has a guest? Maybe you shouldn't-
The door swings open and a bright eyed and perky Mulberry stands on the other side of the door.
"Anon! How are you? Ooh! Ooh! You have to come in, I haaave to introduce you to my friend!" That's weird. This doesn't resemble the calm, somber mare that you met this morning. Not that it's a bad thing. She grabs you by the shirt and pulls you in.
"Berry, have you been drinking?" you ask.
"Only a few glasses because I have company. Autumn! Autumn! I want to introduce you to my neighbor!" The pit of your stomach drops.
"Alright. Alright." says the familiar quiet voice as you see her brown hair round a corner. When Autumn locks her eyes onto you, her face shares a similar expression of shock and is then replaced with a smile.
"Autumn this is Anon. Anon, this is Autumn, my friend that works at the library."
"Uh. Hi there," you chuckle.
"Hey," she answers with a cute smile.
"Can you believe that this tall stallion helped take care of me two weeks ago when all that happened? He didn't even want anything in return. He's suuch a gentlecolt." Mulberry states. You arent sure if you or Autumn blushed harder.
"Oh really?" Autmn asks, playing dumb.
"But what you really have to see to believe is his COOKING! Oh my Celestia. It was amazing. Every single little bite was-"
"Well. Uh. I don't mean to interrupt girl time, but I prolly should go," You mention, trying to escape the situation. If Fluttershy saw this...
"Nonsense!" says Mulberry, "We got a ton to drink, why don't you stick around?"
"Well I promised I'd help out Fluttershy move out tonight...” you say to Mulberry.
Autumn looks at you curiously with a little worry, but keeps her mouth closed. A knock at the door breaks the conversation and Mulberry answers it. You look down to Autumn who looks up at you with visible concern.
"Fluttershy! Anon was just talking about you!" Mulberry mentions.
"O-oh. Hi Mulberry. I thought I could find Anon here." She steps into the apartment and walks up beside you, until she notices the fall colored pony next to you. Fluttershy takes a step back in nervousness.
"Oh. Uhm. Hi,” Fluttershy says to Autumn.
"Hello." replies Autumn, looking from you, back to Fluttershy, and then back to you again.
"Uhm. Autumn. This is Fluttershy, a close friend from Ponyville. Fluttershy. This is Autumn, Mulberry's friend from the library." You say, formally introducing her to tomorrow's date. Fluttershy instantly straightens up and eyes the mare from head to hoof.
"Oh. I've heard a bit about you." The yellow pony says to her.
"Really?" Autumn asks curiously. "Like what?"
This is bad. You can't let this happen.
"Well, uhm. We better get started Fluttershy or we won't be able to get you moved in." You answer,
"Oh... Right," she answers, not taking her eyes off of Autumn. "I suppose we will have to talk some other time. You work at the library right?"
"That's right." Autumn answers,
"Okay, we will have to have coffee or something."
"Sounds nice," answers Autumn. Mulberry stands on the sidelines, not eating up the tense atmosphere, but stares at the wall behind you in a tipsy daze. Or is she staring at you? There is too much tension in this room. You decide it's now or never.
"Alright, well I'll see you all around!" You call out to the room and pull Fluttershy by the wing out of the apartment.
Anon takes his 'friend' out of Mulberry's apartment with a wave goodbye. At least, you hope she's just a friend. She was being so protective...
Does she know about your date with him?
"Bye Bye, Anon!" yells Mulberry out of her apartment. She sighs and closes the door behind her.
"Isn't he dreamy, Autumn?" Mulberry says to you, or maybe more to the ceiling.
"Yeah." you answer truthfully. "He is."
"Just think... a male like that could have any mare he wanted... I would do anything if that mare could be me." Taking a sip of wine, you setting your glass down.
"Maybe you should wait a little bit before you jump back in the stallion game..."
"Oh Autumn, just because you and I both had a bad experience doesn't mean we should quit!" Mulberry answers positively through a haze of alcohol.
"I suppose." You say while grabbing your glass of wine, looking at your reflection in the red liquid.
"Plus you said you had that date coming up!" the tipsy mare teases. “You're the last person who should say that!”
"That's different. I waited a long time after... him. And seeing that some stallion did that to you too... I think you should wait too."
"Oh Autumn, you've never even met him, and thank goodness for that. I wouldn't wish that stallion on anypony. I'm happy that they took him downtown."
"That's good," you answer. What are you going to tell her? That you have a date with her crush? And what are you supposed to think about this yellow pegasus? You take a deep gulp of your wine and get out your phone.
Maybe you should text him...
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This chapter was both cute and awkward for everybody.
No please god don't let the Fluttership sail. Wouldn't it be much more fulfilling to sit and relax in the park with a cool Autumn breeze blowing over you while you munch on some Mulberry pie.
I just had one word for Anon…tree way, also in this universe do herds…or in this case packs exist?…nah maybe not, it take away the drama…or does it?
Fluttershy isn't going to leave now, is she?
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Autumn and Mulberry should team up.
Oh my gosh....this can't end well.
Autumn likes Anon, Mulberry obviously likes him, we know where
stands, and Brand it's obvious.
My thoughts on this chapter, anyone can let me know what they think.
Brand is faking having a date, hoping to make Anon jealous or is up to something.
Fluttershy obviously saw Anon with Autumn, and is going to try VERY hard. It's obvious Fluttershy sees Autumn as a major threat and considering how similar she is to Fluttershy in some ways, it's going to be an ugly mare fight.
Mulberry might make a move later or something, who knows, she's just throwing herself towards the closest guy that treats her decent.
Autumn? I'm rooting for her and considering we've seen her perspective, I got a feeling she's going to be the main contender.
Also some other things,
Oops! I think you meant hooves.
Go Autumn! You can do it!
4895708 Yeah, when this goes south, and I'm pretty sure it will, Anon's got a lot of explaining to do.
nooooo anon cant date fluttershy. autumn all the way.
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I think you're right about Brand, but beyond that who knows what's going to happen. I'm worried Flutters might take drastic action if she feels she stands a real chance of losing Anon. Right now I have a nagging feeling that some of these characters aren't going to be alive by the end of this story.
4895851 I'm curious if this is going to be a multiple end story or what if's. I got a feeling Brand is going to be a shocker for Anon and it's going to be hard for him to let his friend down. Anon is clearly straight in this story.
4896135 Think? I'm pretty sure if anything that's been indicated how she's acted in the past, that IS going to happen. Very curious about what connection Autumn has with her ex.
4895708 I too am on team Autumn
This will be the fight of the century.
I hate how some plot points are just glanced over, specially when the effects of said plot points are at least somewhat important. For example:
In here Autumn says that she, like Mulberry, had a bad relationship with a stallion (why did she do nothing about Mulberry's relationship then?) that was never even hinted at before, barely touched upon, then only left to wonder about the possible effects of Anon's future "special somepony".
Also; is Fluttershy putting a love poison on Anon's coffee? i.imgur.com/g64djXM.jpg
4896186 Holy fucking shit it's HumanSVD!
Being the target for 3 women at a time FUUUUUCKING SUCKS!!!
You constantly feel like you're choosing between them, trying to keep them all happy. 
Especially if they're all a group of friends. Seriously, this exact predicament ruined about 5-6 years of my life, drove me fucking nuts. 
I ended up dating one for a while but she kept telling other people about things she hadn't actually done with me 
, then ended up having a STILL ONGOING on/off engagement to one who broke my heart 
, then had a weird/awkward "I didn't like her in-that-way" kinda friend who constantly tried (and failed) to get me drunk and bang me 
. In they end they all hate each other now and still pester the fuck out of me 
. They stalk me 
, get my number from my psychotic mother 
, and constantly bother me for a date/fuck/marriage 
Some guys dream of having ladies fight over them.
They don't realise how much it fucks you up for a long time 
. The sex isn't even worth it guys, seriously. I've pretty much decided I'm going to either figure out a way to become asexual, or just cut my dick off, because fuck having to put up with all that bullshit in exchange for a half-decent fuck every once in a while 
.
Man, I really got fired up there, what a rant...
. Please don't misinterpret this as misogyny, I tend to actually be better friends with women and generally find ladies to be better company. I'm as far from sexist as you could possibly get.
Get Love struck with three ponies?
The thing I still don't understand is how does Fluttershy still have a chance? She was such a headache for him. Heck, she was even one of the main reasons why he moved in the first place. So he's going to "chance" on her "relapsing" and attempt to forget that she was literally a crazy stalker? Is he just supposed to forgive and forget everything that happened? She even abondoned her livelihood and left her friends, just to follow him. She wanted to sleep behind HIS building! Wanting to "start over" isn't a good enough excuse to give chances to someone whom already have had and ruined so many chances before to be on good grounds with him.
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Gah! Mistakes! Mistakes everywhere! Thanks for pointing them out. Ill patch those up.
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Did I point out a mistake? I thought I was answering a rhetorical question.
Hmm... am I the only one hoping Fluttershy will be able to redeem herself and win back the heart of anon in the end?
Team Flutters? Anyone?
4896208 Lol, of course you're on Team Autumn!
Becareful for 
4895434 Considering the obvious monogamy styles relationships we've seen so far in this story, I tend to think not for herds or packs.
4896632 Lol, you're suprised? I come to this sight every day and anything that's Human x pony or etc, I'm there.
4898196 Team Flutters!
Team Flutters all the way
I think this story is going to have multiple endings.at least that's what I hope it's going to be. Because I like to see the outcome of all situations..
4898597 Maybe a little. I'm a big fan
Haha, I'm amused. I enjoy this predictament that Anon's in.
If the tiger fight between Fluttershy and Autumn occurs, then, unknowing of Berry's feelings, he leans on Mulberry for support. You know, that support that waltz out and smacks a wine bottle on Autumn's head.
Then he goes to Brand, the idea of Brand liking males going completely over his head, and Brand spills his feelings of liking Anon. Or he doesn't do it right away, but then Brand gets nuclear wasted and humps him when Anon isn't looking as Brand 'let's it go!'.
4898836 Just read your comment about being in something like this. Sorry for that but trust me cutting your dick off is no solution!
4899447 Yeah, I know...
I was 99% joking with that one, but the sentiment remains. 
4899844 99%? So what you're saying is.....just the tip?
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I laughed way too hard at this comment. You guys are the best.
4900077 I do what I can for an author that entertains my desire for Human x Pony.
4900057 Maybe just go for circumcision?
Or if I'm feeling a bit crazy, I could just get creative with a cigar clipper and a heavy object
I have a feeling nobody'd wanna smoke my pork sausage after that
You sir, have convinced me to keep all my genitals where they are.
Already Fluttershy's acting possessive and controlling of him. He's not in a committed relationship with her he can see whoever he wants he doesn't need her permission or approval to do so. I can't decide if I'm on Team Autumn or Team Berry at this point.
I am still on Team Mullberry (as someone mentioned that name)^^, i like Fluttershy there too, but i think i am for the OC for a change.
I didn´t thoght he would make a probably false promise about his dates with other mares. I somehow think he don´t keep his promise. I really don´t know which mare i want to be with him, i don´t have the urge to have the Auutum/Anon pairing. I just like the personality from Mullberry somehow a bit more then the secretery Fluttershy, i honestly don´t now what keep me liking that Fluttershy there, maybe because she is so...(right word....)....needy?
Does someone knew a Kingdom Hearts story? I want to try something new, the most crossover i know doesn´t work out good enough.
4897450 i don´t know if you mean the same thing, but i really think, he should not just deny other dates, because fluttershy could get mad.
Yeah I must have missed the part where Anon became in any way committed to Fluttershy, and a reason why he would owe her anything. She was an annoying stalker previously, and she's still being obnoxious and posessive. He should just ignore her until she unfucks herself, although that might screw up things at work...
4901171 I'm kinda for Autumn right now but I may root for Mulberry is things change. Mulberry wants to have a decent guy and raise a family one day and when she sees someone decent like Anon, it's no surprise about he crush. Regardless of what happens, I hope it doesn't change the friendship of her and Autumn.
I have a feeling in the end that Anon will end up with FlutterShy. But honestly I think that's a bad idea.
Autumn is the better choice.
I figure shit is going to it the fan several more times before he settles on one of the 3 mares assuming a 4th pony doesn't come into play.
But honestly I still think Anon should be with Autumn in the end. If not Autumn then at least give Mulberry a try FS just doesn't seem like a good idea.
I don't have anything against Flutter Shy just that the crush anon has on her seems forced.
Also more character development would be nice.
oh my the tension in that room oh shit
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There could still be hope for Fluttershy. She could see the error of her ways and realize she's been causing more grief for anon than anything else as she has done so in the past.
She then hugs Anon and tearfully apologizes for everything she has done.
Anon ponders for a moment then hesitantly embraces Fluttershy and decides to give her a second chance and they both share a romantic kiss.
Fade to black.
Throw in an epilogue of some sort.
The End.
Or um.... you know, whatever team you want to root for is fine
4910227 .......................................Autmumn.
I'm a bit confused into what is the deal he had in his hands, is he trying to help her get over him? or is he willing to give them a chance to be on a real relationship?
4905135 I don´t know enough about Auutum to want her in a relationship with Anon, but Mullberry looks nice right now. I don´t know if she just like him since he helped her, but somehow this turned out nice enough for me.
I want him to be together with Mullberry right now.
Autum....well maybe if i get to read more about her, i just can´t decide what to think about her.
Fluttershy.....in one way it looks forced, and i don´t like thath he want to cancel his dates with autum just because of Fluttershy doesn´t like it.
It looks like he would letting her set the rules for his lovelife.
Even if i like the cute Fluttershy picture and .....yeah i like her as the secretary, well...she is cute and nice but it doesn´t look like she could keep her inner demon long enough locked away. I don´t want Anon to let her set the rules for his lovelife. (Hope i don´t confue you...sometimes i don´t get my english right.)
4926752 exactly why hes got to go on dates eith them to learn more. Fluttershy is just confusing the story and the whole 'I moved from ponyville and left all my friends behind because my love for you is much stronger than any friendship ive had prior to meeting you"
Is just so out of character of her. It feels like she is forcing herself on anon.
I dont mind if annon is with Autumn or Mulberry but fs is just well not acting herself.
4928044 it was schocking the first time i read that she just leaved her animal....HER ANIMAL´S
and Angel.....i never thought she would let Angel in Poniville
PS: It seems we want the same thing in this story if i understand it right.
I think might be something wrong with the coffee but i hope I'm wrong. Also the coffee is a lie!