Delving into long forgotten ruins Trixie finds something that can make her Great and Powerful in truth. But at what cost?
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Will there be more chapters?
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It's complete for now.
I'm sorry, but-- as much as I like the idea-- the format of the story makes it about impossible to read. I see sentences structured without rhyme or reason, sentence fragments around, and the whole 'show, not tell' rule violated a bunch. You need to seriously go back and revise this thing, maybe taking in other authors to help you with things. I know you can do better.