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Super Trampoline


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Luna's last letter let her let her love-laden lamentations live.


Inspired by a chat/brainstorm with Closer-To-The-Sun on the way back from EFNW. And of course, the awesome song by The Who.

Twilight's Library approved.

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Luna's last letter let her let her love-laden lamentations live.

try saying that 3 times fast!:pinkiehappy:

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Luna'slastletterletherletherlove-ladenlamentationsliveLuna'slastletterletherletherlove-ladenlamentationsliveLuna'slastletterletherletherlove-ladenlamentationslive.

I can has cookie now? :ajsmug:

Excellent! Nice use of clever formatting, too.

And now that I've heard that cover, I want to animate Luna singing it.

How did you do that? The quote boxes.

4679372 [ right_insert ]get rid of the spaces[ /right_insert ] =

get rid of the spaces

. I'll leave as an exerise for the reader to figure out how to put stuff on the left.

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Alright cool.

Pretty nice trick. Although it'll be super weird to include something like this in my stories.

Lovely seriously... Lovely.

Ye gods.

That's a clever setup.

Good story, too.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Nice story the title remind me of the song (both The Who and Limp Bizkit)

4680461 :facehoof: from the story description:

Inspired by a chat/brainstorm with Closer-To-The-Sun on the way back from EFNW. And of course, the awesome song by The Who.

Also, at the top of the story itself, there's a link to a really cool cover I found that's from a female perspective.

I'm glad you enjoyed the story. :pinkiesmile:

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4683009 'Tis true. :trollestia:
(Though I question what it's doing here. :rainbowhuh:)

Hahaha I see what you did there with that title it's the song from the who :rainbowlaugh:

4699759 Yes, yes it is, as I mentioned in the story description. :derpytongue2: I hope you enjoyed it.

amazing :raritystarry: is there going to be a next chapter ? i mean we all know that luna was banished to the moon but will the next chapter be about her regret and how sorry she is or her wanting to take revenge from celestia ? AND BY THE WAY I liked the way you wrote the story that was very good. it made me feel like i was reading documents from ancient history and i love ancient history :twilightsmile:

4719655 wow, thank you for the high praise. :pinkiehappy: I'm not really sure this is a story that needs a sequel, but I suppose I could show Luna and celestia writing letters to each other simultaneously, both knowing the other wont be able to read or respond to them for centuries.

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well that's a very fine idea :twilightsmile:

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I have some real love for The Who, but the Limp Bizkit version does it justice.

4738875 I find myself extremely ambivalent regarding the Limp Bizkit version.

:applejackunsure:

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But I wanted to start a flame war in which we both end up killing each other. :fluttercry:

I did not know that formatting was possible, but you used it well. Have a ribbon:
i.imgur.com/6MrWqNZ.png

(Also, shouldn't Celestia be tagged? She is about half the dialog :fluttercry:)

4901933 Huh. Yes, I suppose she should. Thank you for bestowal of the honor! :yay:

4901933 Huh. Yes, I suppose she should. Thank you for bestowal of the honor! :yay:

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You are very welcome :twilightsmile:

The short description broke my tongue when I said it out loud.

Interesting use of formatting, good job.
Also, nice writing :)
Have a like.

Oh, yes, I do remember reading this now! Don't remember why, though, it's not like someone pointed from my sidebarfic.

Dang. I've got to update my folders.

4679554 Oh dear it seems to not be working in comments anymore! :pinkiegasp:

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Still works for stories though, right?

PS: well shit even with Sollace's Fimfic Advanced tools, it doesn't work for comments. However in-story still works fine.

Note that the recent update dropped the support for [right_insert] and [left_insert].

EDIT: They appear to be back, though I was told they'd migrated to a new command. I guess both work now?

8220699yeah I hope thatI hope gets I hope that gets fixed soon

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I don't believe they intend to support it anymore, but there is a new indent tag where you can set how far it indents. It's haphazard depending on what device readers are using, but it may suit your purposes.

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The function did end up being restored, but it's got a different name now: [figure=left][/figure] or [figure=right][/figure]. You can have pictures, text, whatever in the figure. Looks like you figured (heh) that out, though.

Beautifully done. Also, I had never heard this version of the song before.

Thank you. :twilightsmile:

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