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The rarest and mightiest possession of the human spirit can only be discovered by means of story and by no other process of thinking; to know all this and to have it as your own is to have much.
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This story is really perfect so far
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Thanks
Also, hi
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Hello, glad you liked it
It's good, I guess.
the end was funny
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Thank you
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Any suggestions to make it better?
4719440 Maybe it's just a personal thing but I like a cohesive story, going from one point to another in their lives and having emotions grow over time. This is good, i'm not saying that it isn't, it just isn't written the way I would have written it.
Way to ruin the mood Spike.
Never drink Dash cider.
D'aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!
Yes! Free movie! Also, I laughed a lot. Terror tends to make me laugh. Especially when it's another who's terrified.
I really liked the final line, that was cute.
The complaint I have is that this should have been proofed better. Lots of small misspellings (Dssh, Twiloght, Spitfore) throughout. Given the story is ever so slightly over 500 words, that just looks bad.
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I apologize for that. My phone can be a little crappy at times. I will return to it with a more refined eye. Thanks for the critique!
frankly too short for my tastes.
You think there are people who don't care? Outrageous, I say!
Really liked it; cute, short, and other good stuff, only need editing
Maybe i will find time to reread this one, and will point the things out
Good luck
I like this story so far! Keep it up
Welp now you know how much Rainbow loves her cider