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LoyalLiar


Co-founder of the Price of Loyalty universe.

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Luna finds a difficult opponent when bartering with Zecora in the most valuable currency.

Everfree Northwest 2014 Iron Author Honorable Mention

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I'm at work so I don't have time to read this. I have to say though, THAT is a story hook right there. Nicely done, and expect me back later today.

It was pretty good, but I'm not sure why it's marked as "Dark". Didn't seem that dark to me, though that wasn't a bad thing.

Hah, you got me before I even could ask about its canon status, though I was already fairly sure it wasn't. Too many probably conflicting details compared to PoL.

Zecora frowned. “You speak as if my request is bizarre, but is this place not just such a bazaar? Your kind trade in marriages measured in bits, and families are purses one wins by their wits. It is your kind who barters with lives, not my own. Now we’re simply discussing the size of your loan.”

That is just ridiculous, as if noble politics is the same as war. maybe zecora would have a different attitude if she actually met a soldier

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