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Dark Colt Sabata


Common ideas executed weirdly, if inspiration and motivation strikes.

Comments ( 18 )

Wow, Flutters has turned into a total badgrass in this fic! Will Flutters find the elements (and, if so, would the Apple Siblings and/or Dashie help her)? And, if the elements are found can the caribou be defeated?

This kind of reminds me of the Season 4 eppie "Bats" where AJ and the rest of the Mane 6 goad Flutters to use her stare to get rid of the vampire fruit bats and the element of kindness becomes a batpony as a result. I like it when timid little Flutters shows her badgrass side!:flutterrage:

Is Apple Bloom (or her fellow crusaders) going to make an appearance in this fic? I would love to see the CMC's reaction to this new Flutters.

Update soon.

4901578 Nah, the CMC won't be making an apparience on this fic. And the answer will be revealed in future chapters, no worries though, this is will be like 4 or so chapters long.

I have no idea what is going on... I usually like some prelude before being thrusted into a story.

I hold my negative comments for now. It is well written and all, but just a little fast paced

4901901 The After Years doesn't give much explaination either until near the end of the game, but you are right. My writing skills have been getting worse as of late.

4904990 it might be just me, but it's fine as is

I'm sorry to hear that you've cancelled this fic. I'm sure you had your reasons, but I would have really liked to see a badgrass Fluttershy rescue Equestria (with or without the rest of the Mane 6). Oh well, I hope we can see some new stuff from you soon.

Please continue this fanfic: you have so much potential and I like this story so far; don't give up on it...

5202251 If I could get some HELP in writing it, I would.

5469457

What if I decided to join you in it...?

You definitely take your time on thinking about this, dude. And don't worry, not judging or anything.
But what the other guy said is right, you are good at writing, so there's no shame in what you're doing here. You are an artist, dude. Unless your dreams or priorities have changed, then you shouldn't give up.
Let's pony the heck up!

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