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Trixie and Twilight are best ponies! (Diamond Tiara is best filly :D )

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This was...amazing.

Her eyes fell upon a brown-coated mare eating from a pile of hay to the side, with a bald spot on its flank in the shape of a six-pointed star.

Wait, is that... Bwuh? :rainbowhuh:

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Juuuuust a (happy) coincidence :pinkiesmile:

I saw the short description and thought I was going to see 'human' x horse. The full description was a major let-down.:raritydespair: Does she at least order a Bad Dragon toy or something?

I applaud you for doing this, for it had to be done.

Kawa #8 · Jul 8th, 2014 · · ·

This was hot.

Plot twist: conception is reversed, Shimmer gets pregnant from the horse.

“In fact, I don’t even have my licence yet! So if we pass a cop, just act cool, ‘kay?”

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Uh... it is human x horse...

4662193 That would actually be a pretty interesting sequel.

4662336 Simple mistakes do tend to make good plot kindling.

Best Clop ever!:heart:

4662257 Oh. XD

Misleading description has been doubly misleading.:raritywink:

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Makes a certain amount of sense too. If she's actually going into heat and that's not just a metaphor for her being horny, that would imply that she's more of a 'pony that looks human' than a 'pony turned human.' ...Meaning her internals would still be equestrian.

Comment posted by Indigo Shine deleted Jul 8th, 2014

4662405 Indeed they do.

4662860 That is a VERY good point. Methinks not taking that bit of precaution is NOT going to end well for Sunset if it is the case.

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'Her internals are still equestrian'... My god, that is BRILLIANT :raritystarry:

Somepony should tottally write this!

No regrets. :moustache:

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Just give her a horse pussy.

4663026 Do it. This was good clop. We have faith in you.

This is almost as arousing as Armok's naked, uncensored, uncontrollable, and orgasmic dwarven genocides.

There's never enough pony-on-human-female action, even if this was a little off the beaten path, if you know what I mean. Still, a very satisfying read. Well done!

I shouldn't enjoy this, but somehow I am.... :pinkiecrazy:

This was unexpected.. but welcome!:twilightblush:

Kawa #26 · Jul 9th, 2014 · · ·

[CHANTING FOR A SEQUEL INTENSIFIES]

Tulip #27 · Jul 9th, 2014 · · 23 ·

Huh. Ggay!:trollestia:

The stallion’s eyes became love hearts

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But what the hell man. I enjoyed this a surprisingly good deal more than I thought I would.:applejackunsure:

well...that was somthing. :rainbowderp: still, it was a decent read.

EqG human/ponies in heat? This is new. I'll give it a go.

Edit: Just read it. Full blown bestiality just isn't my thing so I can't give it a thumbs up.

4667244 Hey, at least you're honest. :ajsmug:

Hmm, perhaps...

Her eyes fell upon a brown-coated mare eating from a pile of hay to the side, with not a single bald spot on its flank in the shape of a six-pointed star,
but twenty seconds with a portable electric razor fixed that.

:twilightoops:

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we're on the same boat, mate... so... we were never here, OK? :derpytongue2:

4661867 Does this story have any connection to this 'Lyra, Quit Horsing Around!' by darf or at least inspired by it?

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Partially inspired, yes :pinkiesmile:

Love it! New concept but great story all the same!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

::applecry: I'm scarred for life

4667244 I dunno man. The horses here clearly had humanlike intelligence/emotions and were able to give non-verbal consent (by nodding). They were fully aware of the situation the whole time. It's only bestiality if the animals don't have sapience and cannot consent to sex.

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Though to be fair they were only like that for Sunny, since she's sorta like their kindred spirit :3 (I think I'm using that term right...)

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Still they were closer to animals than sentient beings like intelligent aliens or FiM ponies, at least in my mind. I like human/pony relations, including romance, and even encourage writing about it, but animals in the sense we know them (basic intelligence, only enough to fulfill instinctive behaviors) were present here. You don't have to agree with me but I have to draw the line at some point.

I won't dislike the fic because I thought effort was put into it and it's pretty well written overall i you're into that sort of thing but I can't thumb it simply because I need to stick by my principles.

On the other hand I'd love to see the concept of EqG human/ponies in heat explored further. I'd definitely give such fics a chance like I did this one.

aCB

Not really what I was expecting, but whatever. I still read it. The pacing at the beginning was very off putting, like most clopfics, but I can't really judge too harshly on that.

Oh my glob...... traumatised.... forever...

I don't know what I am feeling right now. :rainbowderp:

Oh. I was expecting this to be like the joke about the soldier and the camel and spent so long waiting for the punchline that I barely noticed the story had ended.

I was expecting a comedy... I got a legitimate clop... I still laughed my ass off.
also like 269 heh heh lol

Well that was oddly enjoyable. Bravo sir/madam Bravo. 9/10
~Tobben

:applejackconfused:
WTF did I just read? And why couldn't I stop?
DAMN you write some good clop!
Here was my reaction.....
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:moustache:

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