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King of Beggars
One of these days we'll form a union, and get the fair and equitable treatment we deserve. Then we'll go too far, and become corrupt and shiftless, and the Japonies will eat us alive.
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Thunderlane: not the sharpest knife in the drawer.
Consarnit, Pinkie Pie.
Uh.. how did the magic "fix" Rainbow if she was willingly doing it? Was that a condition of release like someone saying your name when jinxed?
Also the reverse Zombie idea is genius.
So the fog made Rainbow behave as if she was encased in stone aye? Fun idea
And fun story overall! Button had the best ideas there
Oh, my gosh...
I loves it so much!!! XP Thunderlane, this is why I ship Rainbow with Soarin, and NOT you!!
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The bet was a red herring. She was stuck because the fog had trapped her in place.
Thanks for reading, everybody! I feel like maybe this only made sense to me, so I'm going to change a couple of things to make what happened a little more clear. Nothing major, just a couple of added details. (what a hack I am to have to do this, apologies)
Like, fav and added to my recommendation group.
Good story. I've always wondered, do Pegasi walk on water, since it's basically super - dense cloud? How do they even bathe, their hydrophobic coats should repel the water.
A fun little story, and there's nothing wrong with being one of those! A couple of the word choices were distracting (eg "greeted" is not a straight synonym for "said") but it was still pretty readable. Button's zombie comments were very amusing, though.
Cute. Worth the read.
That was surprisingly cute.
Not bad. Not bad at all. Best part, though? Thunderlane's stupid idea for trying to poach Dash's job will have ensured he's never getting that promotion. The mayor is not going to let someone stupid enough to immobilize a third of the town run anything.
Eh.
It's okay, but something feels missing.
I feel like this needs a sequel or something where Thunderlane and Pinkie both receive karma
Thunderlane for his actions, and Pinkie for forgetting her promise