Nice story and maybe the next one with pinkie.

Round two!

I must say, I really enjoy your writing style.

Why not go Luna or Celestia for round two? There's not enough human x those two fics out there (that don't devolve into stupid futa or some other kind of ridiculous kink),

(On that note, which one of the mane six might you all want to see next? Leave your suggestion in the comments below!)

In order:
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5) er...

And if you plan on going beyond the Mane 6, then Lyra, Raindrops, Flitter, and Minuette/Colgate should definitely be on the list.

this was awesome!

i agree with anonymous, celly and lulu ftw.

4675186 I agree.

D'aww, that ending

That was pretty adorable.

Hope the next pony is Applejack.

Make more, now.

WOOHOOO, I AM ZA 2K VIEWER!!!!!!!!!

This is really nice stuff.

Wow really well written all together considering this is your first attempt at clop. Good Job dude! I can't wait for more. And if I had to pick another Mane 6 to see next it would be either Pinkie Pie or Rarity.

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Gah, noob moment...
How do you see what the current views are on a story?
Newish to fimfic so don't know, sorry!

4683498 when you look at the top of the story, to the right of the titlle. there is a section with a bar that is red or green or both. to the right of the bar is a bar graph symbol with a number. this is the current views for a story. this story's view count is 2,197. right now.

cool I liked it. It was a very good clop you should write a 3 chapter or a sequel that takes place after this story I'd for sure read it

"You facepalm internally. What in Equestria was wrong with you?" indeed anon . . . indeed.

4 out of five

I would have much more liked this if it was about RD's thoughts more then anons. But it's more my personal preference then anything wrong with the story.

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only when you compare over all body size to a human.
the true length of a penis is comparable to how difficult it is to impregnate the female. (see the duck for that example.)
however the more i think about why she would lie to my face makes me unwilling to fuck her again and go with a nice little pie.

This is really sexy! Great job!

Love it!

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pie

As in warm apple pie?

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and some sweet pink pie as well

Nice work! Looking forward to more stories.

this hits the spot :^)

Hot and romantic!
Love it!

Wow, was this adorable or what? You got Dash down pat in this story, especially Round Two, and it really adds a lot. It makes me happy as a chick on trash when an author gets it that her personality is all about adrenaline-soaked sandpaper hiding velvety plush.

Faved and upvoted.

4718664 quick question.....
Why the buck did you bring pie into this?
Like what the actual buck made you thing "oh shit! Cum filled nap time in a shower...... I want some pie."

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Now I want pie.... DAMNIT ITS CONTAGIOUS!

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go with pie of the pinkie variety

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This story was so good I did a reading of it! Link Here

So thiiis kinda just made my day.

My humblest thanks, Navisky; I never knew I could blush this hard at hearing my own words read aloud. Nicely done. /)

Damn this was good. I say that about a lot of Rainbow Dash and human stories, since they're my favorite, but son of a bitch when they're good, they're really good. Absolutely loved this read.

well done u took my best pony and made my ears blush until i was just as aroused as rainbow was lmao!!!

I'm a sucker for Dash x Human stuff in general, but man, this story's really good. I love it when people write Dash the way you did: a pony who acts all tough and cool but is also a huge sap and very affectionate.

I think I'll have to draw something from this story soon. Keep up the amazing work!

(On that note, which one of the mane six might you all want to see next? Leave your suggestion in the comments below!)

Twilight plz

I kinda want to see a part 3. I liked this story.

need part 3 immediately