Twilight Sparkle found a new spell but didn't know who to test it on. She asked Rainbow Dash if she could test the spell on her. Rainbow agrees. However, Twilight accidentally does the spell wrong and bad things start to happen.
This picture is the best I could find to match the story.
I'm afraid this story might be worse than my first one...
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Even dash was evil she is always cool
4688092 so what if the chapters are less than a thousand words
4688190 It just makes it seem really rushed. You could've just put it up as one longer chapter, or added more detail in places
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Because it's the quickest way to kill a story.
Didn't do much for me. Sorry.
Had potential
well then I was right. this story is worse than my first one.
know what? I don't care if you guys hate this story. im keeping it.
the first chapter seemed ok, but it's not something i can get into reading, sorry.
A biiiittt rushed but...
they were dark days...
FAVEEEE!!!!
BTW, yeah. I always used to get hater comments... i took off the story and put another the next thing you know, NOBODY comments.
YOU DESERVE MUSTACHE!!!
4805926 lol yah I think this might be one of my worst stories yet
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Naw.
bad.just just bad
...isn't pulling out the knife a bad thing to do causing her to loose even more blood?^^°
the chapters need to be longer
Did dash turn into dreamy rainbow, or is it just me
Why was this so fast, it’s like me when I was a beginner writer.
Examples include Rainbow dash’s awesome daring adventure, Forever playful and Cupcakes after the fact
Really, couldn’t something else come to mind other then taking over Equestria and the rest of the world. I have a hunch that dash’s element is not looking like it’s normal self now.
Jesus A.J., a bit harsh don’t ya think
Welp, I guess if they don’t find a spell, rainbow or Equestria is screwed
Clever title for this chapter, got a chuckle out of me
Goddamnit rainbow, you’re still just as stubborn as your normal self, this why I love you so much.
Why is this chapter so damn short, hopefully twilight finds what she’s looking for, and plus, A.J. and rarity have to believe twilight that rainbow is evil now.
Classic rainbow dash
This really does remind me of my beginner writer days because of the short chapters, but hey, it was decent no matter what, I just wish dash was bad longer than she was